Please write more. Does patsy like orchid? Please, please, please continue!

I loved the description of Elaine in this chapter, and the life she is leading. But now Im really on edge for the next chapter, where the drama will really pick up! Great job!

Ooo! A nice, big chapter! I loved the part about the coconuts and all the history in it! And was that a 300 reference at the end? :)

Galahad is such a flirt. :)

Quick question. Do all the knights have a manor around Camelot kingdom, sort of like there homes, rather than live directly in Camelot castle and that is sort of like a central meeting place?

Herbert has pretty sick knot-tying skills. This was really cute. But one qualms- Herbert and Lance are married, right? I don't think they'd be uncomfortable talking about what they do in the bedroom. Then again, Herbert's 21 and has been isolated in his tall- tower by his father, who wanted him to repress his feelings towards other men and maybe, finally being allowed to express those feelings is foreign to him.

Walking in on a gay knight and prince after they were ... gettin' it on? Awkward! This chapter made me laugh.

Huzzah! Lancelot/ Herbert morning fluff! That was one of the cutest moments I've ever read!

Awww. . . LOVED the little bit in the end with Patsy and Orchid. I can't wait to see how their relationship blossoms . ( Also, Orchid isn't the only one who thought Patsy was cute under all that mud . ;) )

Le gasp! I wonder what Orchid's mission was about Prince Herbert. I'm loving these chapters from her point of view.

Aww, thats cute. I loved the last line espeically. Im so excited to read more, espeically the up-coming things with Elaine!

Im loving it so far, but quick question. You said Lance was 21 in this and it takes place the same year as... well, everything in Spamalot. So, Lance is 21, but how old is Herbert?

"Why did you hit her with your shoe?"

I cant help but think of Lancelots constant hitting of people with shovels. And now, shoes? Do you have anger issues, Lance?

Hey there. Im loving the fic so far, and Im excited to see where you take this. I love how youve incoperated some Arthurian legdend ontop of Spamalot.

My only critque (and a rather nitpicky one at that) is that Lancelots tabard crest isnt a dragon, its a griffin. Pfft... Im sorry, Im just so detail oriented.

Anyway, loving it and please update soon!