|Reviews for Can I betray the man who inspired my voice?|
| Allanna Stone 2/4/13 . chapter 23
| TeamRierra 7/22/12 . chapter 23
| MusicOverMatter 7/15/12 . chapter 23
Awwwww! So cute! Loved it!
I've always been slightly against the Christine and Erik pairony because she loved the viscount. So anything Erik/OC is greatly acceptable in my eyes as long as the OC is good. And my dear, yours was divine!
I loved her being mute for the first part and gaining her voice back brought tears to my eyes. And I must say, Erik becoming famous as a composer and it being revealed that he OWNED the opera house was wonderful!
I appreciated how much you put into developing their relationship, and not leaving it at simply loving each other for better or for worse. The angst and passion you employed did their jobs well, since I had to stop reading for a while I was so upset when Nina left!
I was shocked when Erik was shot! And thoroughly concerned when it was stated that he may not regain the use of his hand. But the peril played itself to it's best advantage, as it came with Nina writing that song about how she would feel if she lost Erik. Basically an epitome of her feelings and her undying desire, compassion, adoration, and love for him.
The pregnancy was not unseen, but placed well. It helped drive home the fact that this was a permanent relationship, and that Nina's flight really was just to let them cool off. And the Valentine's Day scene was quite enjoyable! I couldn't stop laughing when Erik decided to pay off everyone to pull off an improptue (though heartily accepted) Valentine's Wedding! Erik's song, Nina's return, Madame Giry's confrontation, and what came afterwards were all both well toned and... How shall I say? Steamy.
Hey! I'm not complaining! It was actually easier to read because, unlike the more smutty pieces I've encountered (and didn't even finish), it was more emotion and passion than anything else, which made it more contributing to the story. Smut, as far as I'm concerned, doesn't do anything for plot. You didn't really write smut, you wrote desire, passion, burning, and feeling.
And finally, your ending was perfect! Erik arguing with Nina in the epilogue was priceless! Loved it to bits! You whole epilogue really was great. The only thing I may make mention to was the absence of any developedment on the children. No decriptions, no activities, just names and gender. But I do believe I can completely forgive you there!
Thank You! For a truly amazing story. :)
| Penelope Zozes 6/25/12 . chapter 23
That was probably ONE of the best phanfics I have ever read! It was AMAZING! ;)
| skittlesgirl99 5/27/12 . chapter 23
I just read that entire story. THAT ENTIRE STORY. So good. So good.
| Ash 3/10/12 . chapter 15
Very well written. I loved this chapter. I swear I had a tear in my eye by the end of it.
| Phantom Serenity 2/19/12 . chapter 23
*applauds* Great chapter! Wonderful end!
I will miss this story for sure. It was wonderful.
| trrmo77 2/19/12 . chapter 23
Wow... What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! I loved it! Their relationship is beautiful and hilarious. :) And their night in the gondola was priceless. ;)
Sorry I didn't get to your other chapter when you posted it. Our family has a music performance tomorrow night and we were rehearsing all day today. :)
Looking forward to more of your other story - it is going to be great! Have a blessed evening!
| katdancer 2/19/12 . chapter 23
I loved it! :D very good! Can't wait to read the next one.
| Phantom Serenity 2/19/12 . chapter 22
Meg and Andre are too cute! And Nice on the *Ahem* gondola ride.
| Availre 2/19/12 . chapter 22
I'm really surprised Erik was that calm about the big announcement
| Availre 2/19/12 . chapter 21
Oh thank goodness Madame Giry got put in her place!
| Guest 2/19/12 . chapter 21
Is LND still on YouTube, and if so how do I find it?(what do I put in the search box?)
| Phantom Serenity 2/19/12 . chapter 21
LOL I love Erik playing Cupid! And YAY! They are back! And so in love!
| trrmo77 2/19/12 . chapter 21
What a nice way to make up. :) I'm so glad they both stood up to Madame Giry, she was poisining everything. Perhaps she will change her heart and something good will come of it afterall. Can't wait to see if Andre and Meg 'tie the knot' and why Erik needs blankets... :) - and Erik's response about the baby!