What a creepy fate...but I liked it. The verse was very good too. It fit nicely with the story and added a poetic note to it. Very good description and interesting plot line.

Hey, I really love this story and I'd like to see more of it. If you could make a sequel or a next chapter or something, I'd be really thrilled :D Please keep writing!

I really like this fic. It's a very unique take on this couple. Your writing style is very nice with only a few tiny grammar mistakes here and there. I'm just a bit sad that it's only a one-shot, it would be interesting to see what happens next!

I would absolutely love to see a sequel to this.

This was an amazing ulquihime story, I really hope you add to it one day to show what happened after Ulquiorra captured her. It was beautifully written,and please write more for these two I think you captured their personality's really well xxxxx

okay, I've read this story three times and going for the fifth time-read it the fourth time already-and i have been waiting for this story to keep going. i didn't notice the it was completed til now. i love this story and i want to know what happened so what happened? did orihime put up a fight with ulquiorra about staying? did any of the park rangers find out that orihime was gone? or did orihime became ulquiorra's mate but still went to her job as park ranger? srry, but i'm a very curios reader.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOW! This story practicaly sparkles! You're a really talented author, you know that?

This was a REALLY yummy one-shot (though I, like everyone, hope there will be more) and it's one of the best that I've ever seen!

I admire how you kept everyone (mostly) in character. Just that in the end I don't really think Orihime would give up her friends and stuff so easily... BUT WHATEVER! Constructive critisism!

AND the awesomeness of the overall story totally blows that one little thing outta the water! I especially like how they don't actually meet until the last quarter of the story; that was pretty refreshing. And then having it from Espada #4's POV made everything a whole lot more meaningful :)

In my head, Ulquiorra eventually comes to LOVE (though I do have a soft spot for his current brand of possesivness haha)Hime-chan, but not so much in the human way, similar to the amazingness going on here, but a tad more... selfless? But not. Hah I can't really explain it...

Ohs! I've been ranting... .u BUT ANYWAYS MY PINT IS THAT THIS IS A REALLY GOOD AMAZING STORY AND YOU SHOULD CONTINUE IT IF YOU CAN, HONESTLY EVEN IF IT'S ONE MORE CHAPTER THIS STUFF IS REALLY GOLDEN and I love you.

Did I just say that? Uhm...

Aw, this is great! I love the description and your style of writing! I really hope you might write more if you have time, but hey, no pressure :)

Aw, this is great! I love the description and your style of writing! I really hope you might write more if you have time, but hey, no pressure :)

aww i loved it but just one thing why cant you make more :( i wanna know how he gains her trust or will she ever see her friends and family again!

Awww, it says complete. This story was so interesting i was hoping there'd be more, but even so I enjoyed it. :3