I'm not as keen on this one as on the others... but I don't really ship Draco/Ron. Good try though.

wow! Love this one! It makes me wonder what happened to Harry? Where is he? But I know that's not the point. I love the poetry of longing woven in and out of each sentence in this ficlet. It fits. Love it-surprised? *big grin*

brilliant! simply brilliant. i loved it. im sure im missing something but this was amazing. you will be famous for your writing one day, if not already.

Ooooh.

Oh.

*Pretty*.

wow that is brilliant! i quite like ron/draco stuff and i find it hard to believe u don't like them after reading something that good!

Top notched story! Once again, it's so strongly emotional and filled w/ rage yet it caresses all who read it. I don't know whether or not I was supposed to find it amusing that all males in Harry Potter stories are becoming gay, but it still expressed great emotions. Flabbergasting! )

I like your physical description of Draco.

Gorgeous. I love Ron & Draco as a couple, so I felt so awful for Ron's unrequited feelings. Poor guy.

Anyway, you have such a wonderful writing style in this story! The way you use language and imagery and metaphors makes it almost tangible. I really, really enjoyed it, despite the fact that poor little Ron was so unhappy and Draco was so totally unaware.

Not a big fan of Ron/Draco, but I still enjoyed it muchly. "Amoral exquisiteness," that was wonderful, as was the entire piece. Insomnia and coffee and a lot of bittersweet aching - nicely, nicely done. Title and idea too are very, very cool.

Wow, I really liked this! And I normally despise Draco/Ron...

Twas really well written, I look forward to seeing similar in the future.

Blonde Ditz

PS. You have GOT to get the next chapter of Phantasmagoria uploaded! I'm hooked on that story! Please? *does puppy dog eyes* Pleeeease?

I love your stories, even tho' I barely know anything about HP. They're still so wonderfully written! Lol...and, oh! In my poem "Two Men", the acrostic is "John Connelly and F. Scott Fitzgerald". The 'F' part was kinda weird...lol!

i never liked ron/draco either. but thats really well-written. i want to know what happens.