 AnimeMangaAngel 8/24/07 . chapter 1I was wondering if I could take the ideas of this story and it's prequel and have some fun with them? I'll give you credit as the idea-holder and all that, if you want. Justplease reply to say yes or no. Thanks!
-AMA |
 dreamcloud516 2/21/05 . chapter 1update! # i have no ideas... cause... well, im brain dead. so.. yeah. tootles. |
 Some fanfiction reader again 2/17/05 . chapter 1 Very interesting again, lol. You leave me hanging yet once again. Hope you continue writing this. but take your time. Ideas...? Hmm..I'm not really good at this, at least I think, but maybe the demon could be Bakura. It's just a thought. Keep it up! |
 Draco the Dark 1/29/05 . chapter 1 Good chapter, but what is taking so long with the update? Please hurry, but don't rush because you will mess up :) |
 Draco 1/22/05 . chapter 1 Much potential to work with. Have Bakura help Yugi and Yami help save Tea. You wanted suggestions... The demon tries to kill Tea, but Yami,Yugi,and Bakura kill him(the demon). I will leave the details to you. Just a suggestion. :) |
 secretive shadow 11/13/04 . chapter 1 Okay, that was wierd... |
 secretive shadow 11/13/04 . chapter 1 Okay, that was wierd... |
 Rebel Gurl2012 5/13/04 . chapter 1Oh, update soon! |
 Erckie 3/2/04 . chapter 1 I STILL can't believe that you think "Yami" sucked! I thoroughly enjoyed the ending! And in this new sequel, Bakura's presence virtually guarantees that my best friend will be litterally devouring this short little chappie and every other one with Bakura in it! Please update soon.
_-smile on! |
 Tainted Tulip 1/20/04 . chapter 1Yay! The sequel! I'm HAPPY! *Grins Manically* SO... You're out of ideas, hm? Wel... First of all, I thought maybe Yami and Bakura could swap stories and find out that strangely, they had both battled the shadows at exactly the same time and exactly the same chain of events happened.. Their hikaris dying and being resurrected and everything at exactly the same time. So, yeah, use my advice if you want - either way it'll be great! Oh yeah, I forgot to ask when I did my review for Yami... When I write my fanfic, can i borrow your Yu-Gi-Oh Philosophy? I love it! I'll give you full credit of course! Please email the answer to |
 Danielle 3/13/03 . chapter 1 Write please this is interesting. I have never read such a story shroudded in mystery. IT is..oh what's the word I'm searching for? Aha! Unique your style of writing is really very unique and I like it. Please write the next chapter. |
 Kenelfie 3/2/03 . chapter 1This is really good. I reviewed on the other story before i saw that there was a sequel. I'd help you come up with ideas, but i'm out of ideas for my own stories as well, sorry. Woodelf193:) |
 ShadowKat-Shidobukatsu 1/19/03 . chapter 1Oh, OH! I KNOW!How about, Yugi and Bakura have to defeat the thing inside Tea, but Yami Bakura tries to interfere, and stuff...K, it sounded better in my head...Well, i hope that helped in the slightest, though i dought it-' The cube could be an ancient egyptian artifact, that has all of the evilest of evil spirits that Yami locked away, inside it...Did that help? I don't think so, but hey, I can always try... |
 ShadowFire2 10/17/02 . chapter 1Good story. what if it seemed that Tea was normal, but she wasn't. And Yami Bakura has to help because only he knows how to defeat the demon. |
 Griffin D. Sage 10/9/02 . chapter 1 Good begining, but it's too short.
Sugestions...hmmmmmmm... I know! go to the shadow Relm, but not to duel. Trips to the Shadow
Relm are always fun...*Evil grin* |