nice story, keep it up.

this is funny. the girl has no idea that he was the goblin and she wants to grow up to be just like him.

SEEK PROFESHONAL HELP! Oh, by the way it wasn't half bad but, GET HELP NOW!

Hee hee. That's kind of funny but sinister at the end somehow.

"I want to be just like him when I grow up?"

Kind of creepy. But good story.

Heh heh heh...oh, the cuteness!

Heh,heh,heh... It's not really laugh a minute is it, but it's funny anyway.

Oh my goodness, this is hilarious. I had my doubts at first, but it turned out really good. I love how you have Sarah interpret the events and characters in the film in a very different way. It's so funny, but funny in a clever sort of way rather than the usual "sugar high stuff" :) Good job! I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

As for criticism...I'm pretty sure that it's "Osborn", not "Osbourne". But besides that, it's all good!

uncle gobby! cool. Yes. goodbye.

Hee hee hee...liked all the references...hee hee hee...

Heh. Light, fluffy, it made me giggle.

it's creepy in a good way

This is insanely cute. And that whole "I wanna be just like him when I grow up" line made me crack up! :)

This is so kawaii... Love it...

I think this really sound like something a lil kid would say.. hehe lol D

Well anywaysz keep up the good work.

Bai~

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Evil little Green Goblin girl! IMAGINE a munchkin Green Goblin Girl! Scary! (no offense to munchikins)

Kawaii n.- It sounds just like a little kid...'tis keen n.n *Still giggling*