Story was okay on fluff, but if you expanded a bit more on the details of the story, then it could've been better. A bit sad that Harry didn't use zoids to get what he wanted, or that Bit didn't get to have the Liger, but you're the author so I

SantoryuT-

Man this is good, Liked it overall but everything sems to hapen too fast, next time slow it down alitle to incoporate more into the fic/ story. Other than that good work

This is good so far, I'll definatly read more of it

I love the story, i read the whole thing and i loved it, i can relate to how she was abused by harry, even though i was never abused, but i know how it would feel if i was...

Okay, now thats just extremely sad! Poor leena! Anyways, looking forward to bit and leena chapters!

Sad sad sad. But i'm glad it had a happy ending. (Loves Bit/Leena stories)

i love little shop of horrors! a lot of my friends are like totally ubsessed with it, so i've seen it numorious times, i guess things can grow on you... any-hoo, i really like your story, and... i dunno... you can't really update, so i guess you could write a secuel about them in colldge and everything...

Awesome I finally get to read the ending. I haven't check up on this story for awhile, way cool. Have I told you that you and your stories are so cool? Alright then see ya

Really good.

Very good my child very good

cool!1

i love that movie!

poetry_freak

I really, really like this fic. It's really good. -

Great fic!

I know Mary's wierd, but, are you calling blondes dumb? I'm a blonde and I'm taking advanced classes! Oh, and good fic!