 arnold's gir 11/1/04 . chapter 3 I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITTING PLEASE! |
 Daisy 10/26/03 . chapter 3 Write more |
 spazzkrazy 9/20/03 . chapter 3hello? SassyAngel? r u eva comin back? i wanna know what happens plez! any time now... |
 beckie13 3/6/03 . chapter 3no! please write more i want to know what hapens!
i love your fanfic its realy good
frm beckie |
 Reno's Girl 1/4/03 . chapter 1 Write more I must find out what happens |
 laura 10/20/02 . chapter 3 its really great
pleeze write more soooooooooon
thanks |
 Starship Gazer 10/14/02 . chapter 3 I really hope you write more soon! This is a great fic! |
 TADAHmon 9/28/02 . chapter 3Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, intriguing. Good job. |
 anon 7/21/02 . chapter 2 oooooo! EVIL! |
 BCLover6 6/4/02 . chapter 2hey this is getting pretty god and this is a shameless advertisement hehe sorry well anyway: Read my story Lea it's an original, and I just got done with the 2 nd chapter. Thanks Good sotry I look forward to more |
 LM8 5/31/02 . chapter 2Uh...kind of unrealstic, but pretty good all the same. |
 Iris 5/28/02 . chapter 2 duh, its lila |
 Cosmic Fool 5/18/02 . chapter 1Very good, but i think Helga would have had a bigger reaction.
but it was great! i want to read more. _
Ps no flame intended |
 Twilight's-Mystery 5/18/02 . chapter 1Very good so far.
But I have one little teensy bitsy bit of a complaint (no flame! please don't think this is a flame!)
When Helga tells Arnold she loves him, and he tells her he doesn't love her back (But likes her) you need to have a bit more of a reaction. I mean, I know they've changed and everything, but if they're going to the prom that means they're in highschool. And that would mean Helga's been hanging onto that secret for alot longer than 6 years.
I'm sorry if it seems mean, I really like the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter, and maybe it's just me but I think it would have gone better had you added a bit more to it, like a little more into what helga was thinking when he said " I don't know what to say." or what Arnold was thinking when he was standing there silently..
I dunno, I can't work it out at the moment, that was the only thing that caught my eye. And even though it's supposed to be a mystery I think I know who it is..but keep writing please? I wanna prove myself wrong lol.
Hope you weren't offended by my review, this story really is good ya know.
(This coming from a 1/4 awake teenager ready to go back to sleep) |