Konnichiwa!

You know, reviewing a story whose original publish date is *goes to look* "5-17-02" is pretty sad on my part, but I really don't care. I'm glad I read it. Of course, you were able to write it perfectly, smoothly flowing from scene to scene. And for the love of Ra - Thank God! Someone who FINALLY knows who Miho is! Whenever I mention her people are always like "Who in the nine hells is Miho?" Then I hopefully reply "You know...Ribbon?" The answer I then get is "...". Oh well, at least someone knew. ;

As usual, you wraped your one-shot up with a perfect ending...*scoffs* Pegasus. Who would have guessed? XD Speaking of which, I only thought that he had that gay voice due to the dubbing company after seeing what they did to Ishtar. Heh, looks like I was wrong about that as well. He's even gayer in Japanese and I think I speak for everyone when I say that I'm insulted that he speaks some American in the Japanese version and IS American. Then there's always Bandit Keith...XD Those two characters give Japanse the wrong impression about America. ANYway, I enjoyed how you covered all the main characters in here, Yuugi and Seto being my favorite. UHn...I was wondering why Yami no Yuugi was speaking of 'tact' and was laughing. *Sigh* He really is a Sex God Pharaoh. And Seto should get a life.

To conclude my actual reiview (if you could call it that...I get off of subject far too frequently) I enjoyed reading the one-shot. Which brings me to my next topic -

Bishounen Muse Malik: Oi! Don't even get started!

Spice: _; I'll just ignore you. Chibizoo, please don't quit writing Yu-gi-oh! fanfiction! Dozo? I've seen already a lot of people say this in a review and I figured "Ah, what the hell. I might as well be a cliche as do so as well". It would be such a damned to Ra shame if you quit just becasue some assholes who smoke shit like "Mary Sue" complain. Most of the time they complain:"Oh! It's too gory! I'm so scared! Wah! I could be considered the American Dub version of Anzu!" And really. You give a little thing called a SADISISM WARNING before you actually start the fic. It's your fault that they have immense difficulty reading notes and continue on with the story. Perhaps they have a lack of attnetion span...

If you quit, you'll be giving those annyomous reviewers exactly what they want, hands down. They'll then go on and find other fanfiction author/ess to bitch at saying "Oh-so-offense" comments such as: "that's so gross! Wah! I'm so disapointed! This is, like, um, yeah, so sick!" in their reviews. -_-; Like I said, if they can't fucking take it, then why the hell did they continue and read the rest? It's a little issue that I'd like to call COMMON SENSE! But maybe that's just ME speaking..._ The point I'm trying to make is that you shouldn't quit just becasue a few people wail about how disgusted they are becasue it's "so bloody and gross!" You should continue and prove to them that you really don't give a damn to what they say. Plus, you can always delete their reviews if they're not signed in, so there will be no evidence that they ever commented. It's simple, so please don't give up writing, Chibizoo! To wrap up with a strong closing statement to why you shouldn't quit is as followed: If you made me rant and speak about my beliefs of pulling through like Anzu, then this is serious. I destroyed all my morals and gave a speech just like Anzu, to show you how great an authoress you really are. That counts for something, ne?

Hell, I'm tired. I really need some sake...or better yet, hitohada. XD.

* Spice *

"Jounochi gave a half-hearted wave back. “Heya Anzu.” He politely

beckoned for the brown-haired boy to sit by him."

XDXDXD Surely you mean brown-haired girl? Unless...

But nice story. ; Very er. funny. Has a lot of meaning. Enjoyed the Seto/Yami/Yugi bit. XD

love it!

No, thanks. I've never been much for wine. And your still the most insane author I know. Your also one of the very few authors the make a lot of sense! Not many do..

Pretty good!

This is sort of like an extension of your "Death of Predjudice" fic... an extension no one really needed to see. _- Immensely amusing.

You know, everything of yours that I read, I go: "I can't believe I didn't read that earlier."

This was occasionally confusing, occasionally deep, and occasionally made me fall out of the chair laughing. Basically, it's one of your standard oddfics that I love.

And as always, I have to go take some aspirin to recover.

haha so funny

Most original work I've ever stumbled upon and read. Very very nice work done and very well done.

o.O whooooooaaaaa...

Uhh... freaky! Well written, nice plot, but really not my type... I'm sure other people would appreciate this more than me. I did like certain parts of this though! "

*sweatdrops* That was... er-intresting? No, odd would better fit it. Maybe just both? Intresting, but odd? Yes that'll do...

Hi Zoo. I Aint much for Yaoi, but still, THAT ROCKED! the Pegasus joke had me virtually rolling on the floor...

Pretty interesting fic, Zoo. BTW, did you received my email? I hope I was not too anoying about Yugi and Hotaru. They make such the sweetest couple. Next to Ash and Hotaru! Peace.

lol!

*wanders off still laughing*

heheheh...