Yeah ... this is nothing special, no offense, it's kind of like most radiant mythology fanfiction, in that, descender is born, he/she meets Mormo, he/she saves Kanonno etc. try to make it more unique from the other radiant mythology fics like change up some events or introduce another Kanonno clone. Keep writing and I hope that your writing develops as you go.

Nice prologue! ;) I am curious about the next chapter. The way you descripts the situations are okay, I hope you're getting better!