Please, return to this story. You left us hanging with such a great cliff hanger. Please continue or at leats let us all know you aren't coming back.

Innortal

good story, keep it up, i'm ususally RanAk and NaKu, but this is good too!

-LMG-

I like on where this fanfics is going! Please, please continue! I'm really starting to like the anime/manga, and this is story is way cooler then that! Update soon! Keep it up!

hey update this is great

The deportation idea is a bit stretched.
I like the interaction between Ranma and
Nabiki. The bit with Akane was nice too.

Kasumi seems a bit off. Otherwise a great chapter.

What is it with you?
This is the second of your stories where you haven't updated. A really interesting premise that is sitting here stalled.
I hope you can start updating these as this is one I'd like to see continue.

dennisud

More! This is a great story. Please, please continue it.

With the view that this story is strictly AU, it is, in fact, a pretty decent fic. Quite well written and you've got an interesting plot, but I just don't see Nabiki and Ranma working out - mainly because we know that Nabiki 'has no maidenly feelings' (see the Kinnosuke story of the manga) and we also know that Ranma really doesn't like her. Plus, he loves Akane.

Yes what a great fic! 3 great R/N stories in one day. I loved the way you showed Nabiki stopping the chain reactions that usually occur. That was a nice touch. Please let me know when you add more.
Brenda

Funny, I would had thought Nabiki would had talked to Ukyo and Shampoo either seperately or together into some sort of deal. She's the smart one. Why make enemies when you can have them as partners or allies? (Nabiki's Honor by Cloud Dreamer comes to mind) Is she falling into the same trap as the other fiancees? Ramana as the prize? Would she be willing to share Ramna with the others? And if so with whom?

I always did like Ranma and Nabiki and I always did like Fifth Fiancee. So, this is just so kewl. I really like this so far. Never let it be said that I'm incapable of liking any other pairing aside from Ranma and Ryouga. See? I can like straight couples too!! ...although when Ranma's a girl with Ryouga are they gay? But is sexuality more a matter of psychological gender than physical sex? hmmm...

This has great potential, it does! I think that Ukyo will actually try to hurt Nabs right in front of Ranma if she's this delusional, and she is, friends, at least here, she is! I also think that poor Ranma is gonna have to learn to put his foot DOWN in front of women, but that Nodoka will promptly try to put him back in harness, ere this is done, as she is just as delusional in her way as any of the others.. and to be blunt, while genuinely loving, she's a bit whacked in the head and far more manipulative than any of the Crew, Nabiki included.

send any commentary my way, we'll discuss it.

and if i'm totally off base, I apologise right here.

Well, the first chapter went off without a hitch, a much improved
version of what you had originally sent me. As for the second,
however, I somewhat doubt that the Japanese Immigration
service *could* expect the Amazons from Japan even if they
wanted to. Fact is, I'm a little uncertain how Cologne managed
getting a working residence visa in the first place...

Ah well, let's see how you tackle the Ukyo problem, and whether
or not Ranma can impress upon Nabiki that he's sincerely committed...

Jim.

write more ^.^