Excellent please update soon!

Oh my... Talk about a rude awakening. Suddenly find yourself married naked, clearly had sex with Mr. Green Eyes and don't recall and now you are pinned to a door with a man who has a gun. What the fuck did you do last night Orihime? Did Mr. Green Eyes spike your drink! Did you have to much to drink! Were you so drunk you'd forget you had amazing sex with him? OH THE HORROR! Of all things to forget! Hmm but I do wonder who was at his door.. Now I'm curious... Not to mention wanting longer chapters and another chapter to smack me in the face! Damn it Undercovers! Where is that glorious chapter my face awaits? Hehe Until next time

Love,

RSG (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer Will give your flamers hell to pay! XD Also Anonymous Reviewer Kagome with Email and Sin Mortis from DA and Fiction Press.)

Love it so far :)

damn DAMN! more please :D

Wow, the second chapter sure caught my attention. I seriously want to know what going on now.

Some advice though, you may want to pick your words a little more carefully, some of them don't fit so well with the context. Ex: "she strode into Green Eyes closet". A moment ago she was panicked and hurried around, but 'strode' suggests a confident walk.

Also, longer chapters. Not supper long but chapters like this personally frustrate me. It is good to leave people wanting more but it should be long enough that people can get submerged in the story, that makes the experience out of the fic. Like taking long, prolonged gulps from a jug after a tuff work out. This though, is more like a glass of water in the middle of the Sahara.

this story is so exciting to read:) please keep updating!

I would of said that too if i woke up and saw his slowly rising :D