OMG OMG GOM!

Master DOOKU?

OMG! Didn't expect that AT ALL!

But AWWW! A little MAce story;) How cute! There needto be more of them;)

Oh I loved it! it was very cute, and it was also realistic. I could see something like that actually happening. You did an excellent job of picking up on the atmosphere and attitude of the Jedi Temple, and it was refreshing to see a Mace Windu fic. The Dooku twist was interesting as well. *Smiles happily* Yay! I was worried that after AOTC fanfic would be overrun by bad Mary-Sues and the like, but if your fic is any indication, Star Wars fanfic quality's going up, not down. YAY!

Very well done story. The style worked great here, and the characterizations seemed dead on. I'll let you know for sure after I see ep 2 if I still think so.

By the way... marry me... or I'll kill you.

;-p just kidding... you hope.

Not bad. The formatting is a little hard on the eyes, a break between each paragraph would make it a much easier read. But the story itself is very entertaining. Good job.