|Reviews for The forbidden Child|
| where-is-my-tennant 4/29/13 . chapter 11
So the Doctor is the Doctors dad who married the Doctors wife who is the Doctors mother...NEVER APPLY LOGIC TO WHO
| Ceanna Morgan 3/24/13 . chapter 11
WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! THIS IS NOT OKAY! WHAT JUST HAPPENED! O MY GOD WATWHATWHAT! I DONT UNDERSTAND! WHAT THE FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK! WHAT DID YOU JUST WRITE?!1? MY MIND HAS IMPLODED! WAT THE EVER LOVINGFUCK! HOW DOES THAT EVEN WORK? ARE YOU FUCKING MOFFAT!? YOU'RE MOFFAT AREN'T YOU! ONLY HE COULD WRITE SOMTHING THIS FUCKED UP! HOLY SHIT!HOLY FUCKING SHIT! WHAT THE FUCK! I DONT THINK I CAN RECOVER FROM THIS HOLY SHIT! I'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO LOOK AT THE DOCTOR THE SAME AGAIN! THIS IS SO FUCKING AWESOME! FUCKFUCK! I CANT-!
I GIVE UP.
| TimeLadyofTARDIS 1/28/13 . chapter 11
the ending is wrong on so many levels but awesome on so many.
| MojaveJ 11/28/12 . chapter 11
Positively awesome! Thanks for writing . . . of course as soon as I get my brain untwisted I'm going to read it again. But first I'll check out the "The Time Lord Curse".
| Poe-Boy911 11/6/12 . chapter 11
That's EPIC lmao The Doctor is his own son & finally Ginger wow
| timano 10/28/12 . chapter 11
A fun, enjoyable, well-written story! The twist you used has been done before, but you pull it off in a way that I didn't expect, and didn't recognize until the last possible moment. An excellent read-10 out of 10 stars!
| atwistedconundrum 10/18/12 . chapter 11
Overall, a very good fic. I happened to like the beginning and the ending the best though. I thought that the middle of the fic was a little shaky but still a good over arching plot. I like the whole Theta is his father; it does sound like something he would do.
| Time Lady Evangeline 10/14/12 . chapter 11
I was finishing this fanfiction this morning in church, and I must say, It's one of the best I've read. You wrote this beautifully, and I usually don't like fanfics where they bring in a baby. However, this was incredible. You have given me a different perspective of these fanfics, keeping me reading in excitement. I almost chucked my phone at a wall when I lost internet connection. Hardly anything can get me to do that. The twist at the end was perfectly unexpected. *Claps hands loudly* Thank you, for making my Doctor Who experience more enjoyable. :)
| crazyboutyouu 8/30/12 . chapter 11
Oh. My. God. Plot twist of all plot twists. That was incredible! The fact that you even managed to think of that.. wow. Just wow. Congrats! This story was wonderful. Keep writing!(:
| crazyboutyouu 8/30/12 . chapter 3
Wow this chapter was great! Really well written. Your writing style is a joy to read(: Keep writing!
| Phoenix Gryffis 8/8/12 . chapter 5
this is sick
| Nellium 7/27/12 . chapter 11
Gasp... You really know how surprise your reader to the beginning to the end! Positive point: the Master isn't as bad as he is in the show! Like him and his grumbling remarks! But it's kind of weird to know that he educated the Doctor before they grew together... Never mind, father himself? Well, there is an adjective for this sort of idea: genius.
| Web of Obsidian 6/28/12 . chapter 11
| DoctorWhoFanwarrior11 6/16/12 . chapter 11
I had a feeling something like that was gonna happen, when the name thing came into play, I knew it! I knew there was more of a reason for Theta to be named after the Doctor. Because he is the Doctor! Crazy things like these just make sense in my mind, but I think thts because me and my friends ne'er seem to make sense but we can all understand each other... Anyway, great story! Could you possibly read/review some of mine? And recommend them to othe readers? Jakaoaowheodobsisxkdobdkc Thanks!
| Namei 6/2/12 . chapter 11
That was...just boggling...amazing writing style! Thanks for sharing