Ahhh. This was fantastic. Perfect. I love that they had twins. I was hoping they'd decide to have at least one baby, and they got two. yay! Thanks for sharing this great story. -mommyofboth

Excellent. The wedding sounded perfect for them. I loved the locket and pocket watch and the fact that the kids were involved in the ceremony. Bree's song was beautiful. what a perfect day for them. :)

Wow. This chapter brought tears to my eyes. So sad at the cemetery. Bella is so good with talking to them about their parents. And I loved the snowman family.

That was so sweet! To involve the kids in the proposal like that? Love it. The ring sounds incredible. And I figured he'd be the piano teacher. Which is awesome because then he can take them to and from school and they won't even need a different nanny. Love it!

Excellent chapter. I hope that Renee comes around soon. I loved edward's talks with the kids.

Ah. That was beautiful. Just perfect. I'm glad they didn't just rush down to the guests. I'm glad they took a moment to themselves and to talk. The I love yous were perfect

Edward is such a nice guy. I can't believe he planned that whole thing. I wonder why Renee was nicer. Hmmm.

I'm glad your fixing things. I'm also really glad that Tyler was there to give Bella some insight and perspective that she could have had if she'd just let Edward explain himself. Now I hope she'll approach him and apologize. And let him talk!

Ridiculous. It is not Edward's job to make things better and have a grand jesture. It is Bella's! She didn't even let him explain. She just assumed the worst and that was that. I'm so disappointed in her. I think he should get to yell at her and tell her to grow the crap up! And what's up with Alice and Rose not telling her that Edward is a good guy and that she's an idiot? They know the whole story, and they should tell her so she can apologize.

Bella is a freaking idiot and she makes me want to flounce. Edward didn't even know her when he took the job. She was young and gorgeous, and of course he wanted to get in her pants. She's ridiculous for thinking that it was all fake this whole time. It pisses me off. Edward did nothing wrong. Other than not just telling her he loved her. But even then, she probably would have doubted him regardless once Victoria got to her. I'm just royally pissed. This is the kind of misunderstanding that can be cleared up in 2 minutes, and if they don't clear it up that quickly, I'm going to be even more angry! Ugh.

Awww. Nice. The fireworks sound amazing with the love making. So sexy. I can't wait until they say "ILY"

Awww. Great chapter. It sounds like he had a fantastic birthday. I wonder why Edward has such a skewed vision of his childhood. Both Alice and Carlisle have mentioned it.

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hi! I just wanted you to know that I had this alert in my inbox, waiting for me until I was done with school :P then I opened it ans read, and read, and read... and read some more. I dropped everything, and I do mean everything (I almost forgot I was supposed to make dinner :P) until I finished it :) that's just how talented you are :)

Much love!

Ah, that's quite the birthday gift. ;) things are going really well for them. It makes me nervous about the prologue since it don't seem like they were together together. Hmm.

Edward just needs to tell her the truth! Then it's done and people like James can't threaten him. I'm glad he beat the crap out of James.