nice

except: the revenge on the dursleys. i thought magic done on muggles was illegal?

This is

Amazing

Depressing

Beautiful

and Saddening alll at once. An amazing piece of work for your first fic.

awwww Lei love Sev in this too

I love Lei i have fallen in love.

please write more soon this is really good

I think Hermione's parents taught her good study habits young. She isn't genius level; she just knows how to use the resources she has. Hermione knows how to format an essay, though it might not contain any matter that is too original.

The Dursleys were indifferent to Harry at best; worst case, they accused him of cheating if he ever outstripped Dudders.

cant wait for you to update, love the story

I love this story, the Dursleys and Malfoy ggot what was comming to them and I like Lei.

in this chapter your use of pronouns and nouns are not quiet right...especially when speaking of severus

Yeah, I really liked it. It's nice to know how tender Snape can be.

OMG! That was awesome! If only you could be able to do the sequel sooner, but I know it's hard to have fun sometimes. Great piece though...didn't want to stop reading it!

What a story. Like it but I would Loved it more if it was longer. Can't wait for number 2

Can't wait for the sequal!

Uwah! I love the way you write! It's so nice to have a story with less action and more happiness.

Ackk! What a place to leave us for seven years! Please finish this story.