in this chapter your use of pronouns and nouns are not quiet right...especially when speaking of severus

Yeah, I really liked it. It's nice to know how tender Snape can be.

OMG! That was awesome! If only you could be able to do the sequel sooner, but I know it's hard to have fun sometimes. Great piece though...didn't want to stop reading it!

What a story. Like it but I would Loved it more if it was longer. Can't wait for number 2

Can't wait for the sequal!

Uwah! I love the way you write! It's so nice to have a story with less action and more happiness.

Ackk! What a place to leave us for seven years! Please finish this story.

What fun!

Excellent. Nice to see Severus act like a normal male. lol

Flirting with Dudley is just plain cruel. No need to do that. The prank is funny as long as no one gets hurt.

Good chat. But still didn't explain why harry didn't want to be in Slytherin. Still maybe that wasn't necessary.

Severus might be offended by Harry not wanting to be in Slytherin so he had best tell him why.

Ack! Severus didn't need this. Not that Lei did either. As for being Dumbledore's daughter he bettered tell Severus she is. Some of her other problem could stem from that.

I hope there aren't too many problems with Lei. It was good to see Oliver again.

Good chapter. Although if Lei ate meat she would be able to put on some weight believe it or not.