Thanks for answering my question. Ash is in the story now? Interesting.

Hey LS, this is kinda a review for both of the last chapters. Anyway, its still a wicked sweet story, and my character is still the man. one note about the last chapter though, don't use ash too too much because he is dumb. (sorry to offend any ash fans out there)

I guess you play Final Fanstasy then? any advise on the dark sister in 11? anyway back to pokemon, I didn't see Sakara becoming a Celebi coming at all (neat!) this chapter is one of the best so far I think. by the way Desolation in the city? thats not going to be good for the city...

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. For the last chapter, it was terrific with the fight sequences and quick character backgrounds. This chapter was great too. The Wild ones get out of Cerulean and we meet Ash for the first time in this fic. All I have to say is: keep writing!

E! *^_^*! You have made me a very happy Dragoness with this chappy!! *huggles you and Ash* EEps!! *^O^*; Wah What else to say? Oh, before I forget.. Biggs and Wedge! YES! *^O^*; Oh..are they gonna meet untimely ends? *o.O*; Ehehehehehehe... *^_^*; EEk. I can't say much else...Waah...This chapter was so much fun by itself too! Lots of totally random stuff going on.. Well no definitely not totally random but many many scene changes and geez Pikachu... *>u<*; EEps. Sorry. You definitely hit the hyper button here. *^_^*; Ah what else...Oh man too much! Rockets!! How fun!! *^o^* So how much more of those fellows will we see? *^_^*; Many. OOps. Oh well. *^_^*; E...*@_@*; Wow how did you fit so much stuff in that chapter? Eks, at least they all didn't have to go in Pokéballs *^_^* That wouldn't have been too fun *^.^*; Okay, okay.. I guess I just gotta stop now. I've babbled at you quite enough already. Keep up the good work! *salutes* Tat's all! *^__^*\

*is at a loss for words...*

*cringes* Oh, poor Aryce! Urggh, darn you, Veronika! At least Marysa's okay. Gr. I forgot who is a Steelix...
So, only some changlings can use Forbidden attacks? Maybe you could explain why in author's notes? (or did you cover this already?)

good chapter, but its not looking good for Aryce and Marysa...

Hee..Shoulda reviewed before I read those bio thingies. Umm..what happened...Ah yeah. The ruins and whatnot. Big intense battle.. Looks like they've got s'more problems on their hands. Another pair of baddies.. Heeh..And now...So they're underground...in the ruins of alph...Hum...Sounds like fun. *>u<*;; Will they see Unown or not..? Heh...Well they'll probably find SOMETHING mystical or mysterious or powerful or whatnot.. Or they'll just get lost. Mwahaha...*sweatdrops* Very glad this showed up *^.^* Who's next..? Umm...*checks* Wild! Yay *^.^*;; Very very glad you're still working on this. We all gotta stick to it, ne? Hoorah! *blinks* Well..you get the picture. *cheers* Ehehee...Um...Tat's all! *^.^*;;

Ah...so Michael's doing a disappearing act I see. How will this affect the others?

*blinks* Woot! Review's working *^.^*; Hehee.Really shoulda read this earlier.Ah well. *>_<*;; 'Twas well worth the wait even the extra ones. *^_^*; Wel.Hm.Ek I dunno, this is just getting more and more umm.momentous. So these silly Rockets are gonna try to be good guys huh? Can they even do that without getting into doubly more trouble than they're already in? *blinks* Yeah I think that WAS a pun..*o.O*; Oh well. *^_^*; He.Soo lessee.. Trainers next ne? Don't remember where they were..Oh well. I'll figure it out. Hai! *salutes for no reason* Umm.. Tat's all! *^_^*;;

Yikes!!! I am soooo sorry I have disappeared for a while.

I've been trying to read and the names keep confusing me 'cuz I have to go back to previous chapters. It's fun though, since I am engaged in this story.

Hope to see more soon!!!!

Yeee *^.^*;; That was quite fun. That Mewtwo guy is scary tho. *o.O*;; Lol, I think I mighta mentioned that before, actually.. *^.^*;;; Hmm I can't remember exactly who Galador is, and I dun remember what chappy his bio's in, if any.. *sweatdrops* Is he the elf guy? Mwah.. Umm..Is he gonna have to "capture" us..? Err.. I mean, you can't exactly just walk around with these six Pokémon just kinda..walking around. *sweatdrops* Well, it'd look awfully suspicious if nothing else. Tho.. I'm willing to bet that none of these guys are gonna be happy at all with the idea of going into a Pokéball..Hrrmmmm...*^_^*;;; 'Twill be interesting to see how you handle that. Humm.. Rockets next? Ahh..I think I remember their plot too..*sweatdrops* Well, I'll figure it out. Happy for new chappy yes! And sugar cookies! Lol *^.^*; Heheh, Chloris was good..She had that biting attitude..Heheheh.. *grins* Well, I should probably go now cuz I've got other stuffs to do..*sigh* Ah well..Tat's all! *^_^*;;;

Me likes ^_^

One thing though. You never said where Marysa's pin was pointing... ^^

Overall, a very good chapter. Things are starting to come together methinks ^_^

Leo tranformation was pretty cool and that Illusia he was fighting seemed to me to pawn of somebody eles and/or mad. another cool and high standered of writing chapter from you LS! (Draco's bows)