Wow good job. The battles were great. I liked how you did my character...is good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

Cool, my character makes a dramatic entrance into the fic. Thanks for choosing him. I look forward to seeing him in the future.

You write superb action scenes, and your plot is already deeper than any of mine (and we've only been in 2 perspectives so far!)

You know I'll be here to R&R every time you post a new chapter, and I know I'll enjoy every one of them.

Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Dan

Ah what fun...There's no Ash in it... :/ Bleah. Oh well. Is he gonna be in it at all? I just wanna know ahead of time so I know whether or not to be looking for him. *_*;; Anyways...This was pretty darn good. Even without Ash. Fun stuff. Gwah. I'm kinda tired right now...Better review next time. Tat's all! *_*;;

Good chapter. Full of gramatical errors though.

"Where" is the question. As in "Where is he?"

"Were" is the past tense of the verb. As in "They were over there, but then they came here."

There were a bunch of other gramatical errors I'm not gonna get into, but it's a REALLY good story, and I just wanna make it clear that this IS a positive review. Write more soon.

T B

Is this the same fic i signed up for? did i miss the cut? oh well good story anyway

Nice story although i didn't expect the changelings to still have pokemon parts after they change back to humans. Thats kinda weird but still, good story. Hope you finish the other chapters soon.

I like it when the author writes stuff in a character's perspective. Anyway, maybe I should tell you where my character is from. The Burned Tower in Ecruteak City. If I am waaaay too late, its okay, I will still read the story.

I think this is the first fic I've read with a Sneasel main character, and i must say I've got alot more repect for the pokemon! i mean i like the fight sceans were he is doging and slashing, there great!

Mmmmm, interesting! This is going to be far more complex than i'd imagined. Love it so far, i'll be keeping a close eye on this story as it develops!

Yours in anticipation,

Dan.