what is supposed to happen next?

great story :)

i loved your story i hope you write more soon

Quite a different spin on things, I liked it, the sophia & luke connection has a whole new beginning.

Wonderful:) I'd love to see what happens next:) Please write more:)

the way you ended the story was fabulous. you have the makings of a great sequel. great fic, please write more or another. you are a great writer and i'm not above begging. PPPPLLLLEEEEAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!:)

Very nice

loved the story and i hope you continue it i would love to find out what happens next

You say that there won't be a sequel. ARE YOU CRAZY??!!! How can you call yourself a decent person when you just turn around and leave it like that?! This was great, but we need more! PLEASE???!!!

Good story. Keep writing. I have a couple of suggestions to make for the future that would enhance the "readability". Contact me if you're interested. BTW, you read Laurell Hamilton, don't you? Are you fond of Richard, or is it Jason? Me, I like Richard.

o wow!! great story!!!! sheesh! this is one of the most amazing wolf lake stories ever!! i hope you write a sequel soon!

You do realize that not writing a sequel to a story this good just borders on cruelty! The story rocked so beg the muse to give you some more inspiration.

Please continue this story i fine it very interesting

Great story!! Nice touch with the Al Bhed Geht uv nasehtc sa dryd E's y Vehym Vyhdyco vyh fedr hu meva. E's hud cyoehk dryd'c y pyt drehk.... :)

Wow. That was an extremely long story, it took me like an hour and a half to read. I don't know if it's due to having to read it on my grandparents webTV or what. This was quite an amazing story to read. I loved all the original additions to it, such as Luke and Sophia being wolf soul mates, as well as them speaking in ancient languages. I won't ask for a sequal, as per request, but hopefully your muse will let you write one. Incredible story.(: