| Reviews for Sweet Games |
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Hidden Masked 2/15/12 . chapter 1This was really sweet and amazing! You have just dashed your way up to become my favourite IchiRuki author! :D Love your story! |
SamanthaEscalante 2/14/12 . chapter 1I really like the way that they talk and act, its like they personality. Lovely one-shot! :B |
BosRonald 2/14/12 . chapter 1nice |
chineschopsticks 2/14/12 . chapter 1 Ohhhh semi-kinky confession game.. Lol jk it was cute. :) |
KurosakiCrystal18 2/14/12 . chapter 1Aw! This is a cute story. I love it! :) I wonder what Rukia was going to say... Kurosaki |
TruantPony 2/14/12 . chapter 1Humor, ah...so nicely done. Things I liked: The confession and chocolate game. The way Ichigo was sharing his chocolates that _other girls_ had given to him. The idea of him 'escaping' to gorge on chocolate in the privacy of his own home, so that it doesn't reflect on his 'reputation' at school. The embarrassing stories exchanged, and in particular, the explanation on why Byakuya doesn't wear a scarf anymore. How 'propose' actually means 'impose'. I really liked that sentence, nice place on the words. Highlights: The emotional connection and deep trust. These moments are shared between them only. The disappointment when they come to the last chocolate, and the relief that Ichigo feels at finally telling her he missed her while she was away, and the subtle indications she felt the same. The way Rukia is still as devoted to duty as ever. There's poignancy, of the uneaten chocolate at the end. All in all, very nice! Cheers, Truant |
Prizz 2/14/12 . chapter 1I like it! I expected a kiss and I find it short, but I enjoyed reading it! It makes me miss IchiRuki moments more. |
pamianime 2/14/12 . chapter 1Aww how cuuute! Dumb hollow ruining the moment Dx Great little piece of work x) |
teshichan 2/14/12 . chapter 1Stupid hollow... Ruining the moment. I wonder what Rukia would have said? Hope you write another one for white day! :) |
Innocent Freak 2/14/12 . chapter 1that's so cute...! |
ichirukitard 2/14/12 . chapter 1Awww this was so cute! I loved it to bits! The Booboo part with Nii-sama's scarf, had me laughing my head off. Gosh that was cute and hilarious at the same time XD You just had the right amount of fluffs in here that make me so heartwarming and smiling like crazy. I couldn't help but went awwed at Ichigo's confession of missing her. Rukia was so adorable and such a tease with using her chocolate to get a confession out of Ichigo :D I just loved the whole moment of them laughing and sharing secrets in their own little world. Man, damn that hollow for ruin the moment! :( Lastly, you turned my heart into a puddle of goodies when I read that Rukia's chocolate was homemade. Awww! I hope they will go back and share the chocolate after their fight with the hollow. Anyways, this one-shot was just too cute and sweet. Loved it! ) |
lady-in-denial 2/14/12 . chapter 1this is so cool. ) |
curio cherry 2/13/12 . chapter 1Sweet! |
sweetieebunny 2/13/12 . chapter 1I really really love this! Just sweet and heartfelt. By the way, looks like the end part is somewhat unfinished, how both of them will handle it after that? Just sooo curious about it. |
TB 2/13/12 . chapter 1 Pretty good story, but you couldn't have come up with something better than Rukia stepping on a scarf? I'm not even sure why that is embarrassing. How about Rukia confessing that in Rukongai stores she shops for clothes in the junior miss department? Or that she occasionally has to borrow robes from Hitsugaya? |