|Reviews for The Unseen Factor|
| Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 27
That was awesome! Moriarty was so creepy!
| Bakage 10/8/12 . chapter 27
So I take it that Moriarty hasn't figured out Enola's relationship with the Holmes boys?
| Passing By 9/8/12 . chapter 26
My favorite moment was the brother sister moment. I would love to read more of those. But more of Lestrade would be cool too!
| Guest 9/6/12 . chapter 26
This really cool!
| MarvelDC superhero fan 9/6/12 . chapter 26
Great chapter! Love the twists in the two parts! Can't wait to read more soon.
| Reading 9/2/12 . chapter 26
It's nice to see the reappearance of Ivy Meshle and seeing Elle working. We keep hearing about these cons she does and it's cool to see a little of how she works. Would it be possible to see more of Elle and company during a con?
I love how you kept Lestrade very professional with Donovan and how he didn't wave the proof of Sherlock's innocence in her face. I only wish Anderson was there too for the guilt trip!
Mycroft and Elle teaming up has to be an unstoppable force. It would be cool to see more of that!
Overall, a really good chapter and I can't wait for more!
| Anon Reader 8/31/12 . chapter 26
This was great seeing Lestrade and Donovan finally in this story. I love how you had Ivy instead of Enola going to meet with them. It is nice to see Enola doing a minor con and showing off her skill.
The brother/sister time between Mycroft and Enola was sweet. Could we see more of those two?
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| Pixie Star Fire 8/31/12 . chapter 25
I absolutely love this story. The Enola Holmes books don't get enough appreciation, and I love how you have adapted her character to fit the show, along with your cast of remarkable OCs. Please continue this story!
| MarvelDC superhero fan 8/20/12 . chapter 25
Loved this chapter completely. One can really see the coldness of Violet and the caring and warmth of Amelia. And the ending was perfect. I would love to see all the interactions you mentioned. Can't wait to read more soon!
| Tabbyprincess 8/20/12 . chapter 25
It might be interesting if Enola met Kitty Riley...
You know, I feel a bit sorry for Violet...
| Passing By 8/19/12 . chapter 25
Amelia is quite a mama bear. I love the fact that you took down Violet a peg or two. The last scene with Wilhelm and Amelia was just too adorable for words.
I think something with Anderson and Donovan would be fun to read. You can pick which of your characters to put against them.
| Guest 8/19/12 . chapter 25
I stumbled across your story and this is a very interesting take on the BBC Sherlock and the Enola Holmes mysteries. Keep up the good work
| i'm reading 8/19/12 . chapter 25
never gonna get amelia mad at me! love to see donovan get a smack down!
| neva-chanluvsmonsters101 8/19/12 . chapter 25
Oh wow. This story is amazingly well-written, I'll admit I didn't think it would be fun to read at first. I'm glad to see I was wrong. Good job. Bravo
| Anon Reader 8/18/12 . chapter 25
This contains a very important lesson - never get Amelia mad, she will either shoot you or verbally break you down. This is a very moving chapter, especially the parts when Amelia is talking about her lost child. It was very touching.
I have been very interested in reading more about your version of Mother Holmes and she is very chilling. You had me not liking her with her first line. I can see why Enola would want to get away from that even without realizing it.
More characters from the show would be great, any of the OCs would be fine.