|Reviews for The Unseen Factor|
| Reading 7/25/12 . chapter 23
I love the relationship you'fe developed between Sherlock and Enola. I can just see this in the show so easily! Keep up the good work!
| WhomeverIAm 7/25/12 . chapter 23
I, for one like the snippets. They let the reader decide what exactly happened. (If they have the imagination to do so anyway.)
| i'm reading 7/13/12 . chapter 22
Wilhelm is awesome!
| Passing By 7/12/12 . chapter 22
I really like the idea of Mycroft having someone to talk to and be friends with. Wilhelm is the only choice for that role and you have them play off each other really well.
I can't wait to see what will come next.
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 22
The relationship you're developing between Mycroft and Wilhelm is very interesting. Wilhelm is probably the first person who is an intellectual equal to Mycroft besides Sherlock. I can only imagine the type of conversations those would have.
Again you really need to write a back story for the Lehrers. They seem to have a most interesting and exciting past.
Enola's explanation to Mycroft was intriguing and it made sense. And it just made me love the Lehrers even more.
I cannot wait to see what happens next!
| Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 22
Wilhelm is just awesome! I love this weird friendship you got going between them. You can see how Mycroft is softening a bit but is still the Ice Man.
Is Hatch that hacks into the emails? That was a really funny bit. Wilhelm's criminal profiling makes sense, since it explains how he can read people so well.
I can't wait to read more!
| Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 22
I think it's great that you gave lonely Mycroft an outlet and someone to talk to! It was really sweet!
| MarvelDC superhero fan 6/29/12 . chapter 22
Wowowowowow! What a chapter! Loved the ongoing chess game, the letter, Amelia's advice to Mycroft, his consideration of the past. So well done. I cannot wait to read more soon. Love this!
| tselea 6/28/12 . chapter 11
I was just thinking that you made an interesting choice in switching which brother she turned to and spoke to most. Thank you for explaining. :)
| tselea 6/28/12 . chapter 5
Sounds like we have a British Leverage forming here ... hmmmmm
| Reading 6/22/12 . chapter 21
This really pulled at the heartstrings. I loved the awkward hug between Sherlock and Enola, it was really sweet. Amelia is awesome in this chapter and I'm glad there was a little bit of Arsene and Tekla.
I think it would be really cool if Sherlock had to work with Telka, Arsene or Hatch. That would be so fun to read!
| Ruth 6/21/12 . chapter 21
I really want to know what heist Elle is telling Sherlock. I'm sure it would be a riot to read.
I love the unique spin that you have on Enola Holmes. I read some of the books a few years ago and I thought they were fun without being too Mary Sue-ish. You've taken that and given the character a new breath of fresh air without being too over the top. All the OC in this story are fun without taking too much away from the characters we all know and love.
I do hope you will continue this story and bring in more characters from the show to add to the fun.
| Passing By 6/21/12 . chapter 21
This was amazing to read! I love the intensity, the humor, and feel-good that's all there. Amelia is such a great character and I would love to read more about her.
It was really touching to read Sherlock and Enola beginning to reconcile here. Will we see more of that? I hope so.
Waiting on the next chapter.
| A wolf is a perfect paradox 6/21/12 . chapter 21
Yay for new chapter! Double yay for long chapter, u always leave us hungry for more!
Love this chapter; they are finally starting to work things out! I am excited to see what happens next and what u have planned, will Elle join him now? Or will she wait a bit longer?
I am excited for all that is to come! Excited! More super soon ok?
| MarvelDC superhero fan 6/21/12 . chapter 21
What a wonderful chapter, and some things finally explained. It was wonderfully done. I can't wait to read more soon!