| Reviews for Unexpected |
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RumorGoddess 5/15/13 . chapter 28All I can say is you had me literally crying with this chapter. But it was so beautifully written and real, so I'm upset and I liked it at the same time. |
daytoday53 5/13/13 . chapter 68I've been hooked by this story as I have read it over the last few days. Excellent! :) |
Amfanfichptde 5/6/13 . chapter 68Wow wow wow. I wouldn't be here unless my wonderful reader told me to come read this and I was so amazed. I loved the haymitch/Madge relationship so much I felt like suzzane Collins wrote this but her writing became 20 times better! Your amazing! Perfect. I think it has become my favorite story. Wonderful! I read it in like a day that's how hooked I was! I think you will very much enjoy the SIU fic Just Alittle More Time. I did not write it, though I wish I did! I feel embarrassed telling you to check me out(my fics lol)! |
Guest but I have 5/5/13 . chapter 68 POSITIVE OVERALL REVIEW: Excellent. This is VERY VERY good writing. I absolutely love the plot. And you opened my eyes, to a WHOLE new gale. And quite frankly I like this gale, very much. Madge. Now, I never really paid much attention to Madge. However, I did have a respect for her while reading THG. So you, well, you made me ship Gadge! I absolutely love you so very much you are a very talented KEEP WRITING:) Ending reviews: I cried. I loved this story an I couldn't wait for it to end! That said, I think you did an exquisite job wrapping the story up. WELL DONE.:) NEGATIVE REVIEW: The one thing, I didn't like was the drag. In other words I feel like this story drags on. But I love it, so a solution would be that you should've made about half of it the sequel. I think the dragging started just when the war started. In other words, right there you should have cut the story and made the rest the sequel because you cannot focus on one thing for half a book and something else for the rest. (JUST MY OPINION) PS. To all the reviewers who say that they don't like it because they don't ship Gadge. DON'T READ GADGE IF YOU DON'T SHIP THEM! Also, to those who say the characters are out of character: RIGHT, HENCE THE FICTION IN FANFICTION. And lastly, I think a writer I recently read (believe it or not her SIU -shake it up- story is really good! I never thought SIU was good! She made me a fan!) was Amfanfichptde I think she could use some pointers and you are amazing so, please help her out. Love, The guest. |
Eadin 4/7/13 . chapter 23 The movie was not perfect, and I am certainly not lame for thinking it! Don't you like Madge? Poor girl wasn't in the movie... I also imagine the characters differently than they were in the movie. Sorry, I just had to say that. I love this story, and I may or may not have already reviewed saying that. I've read the whole thing, but I am rereading it. (Yes. It is that good.) Well, good luck! -Eadin |
mountain mama 4/3/13 . chapter 30this chapter just breaks my heart. Throwing those beautiful flowers into the fire! arggggghhhhh |
lizzieee 3/31/13 . chapter 68i love this it's my favourite full timeline gadge fic i absolutly love it and now ive finished it there will always be a piece missing in the others.I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH! |
lizzieee 3/30/13 . chapter 37favourite chapter so far! |
primrose88 3/29/13 . chapter 63Thanks! Thanks for don't killing Finnick! I don't know why has he got to dye in the real book! Again, THAAANKS! |
lizzieee 3/29/13 . chapter 3its drank not drunken i think? |
primrose88 3/28/13 . chapter 48Maybe this sounds like... well, stupid..., but when I read this I was VERY sad and angry. I love this fanfic. Jennycaakes, you're a REALLY good writer, I LOVE the way you write. And I must say I don't speak English, but I'm studying it, so I'm copying the useful vocabulary and expressions I find in your fanfic, and they're helping me so much. Well, again, thanks. Sorry for my bad English. : ) |
Meadbh16 3/24/13 . chapter 68Just finished this story was so amazing my favourite one by far loved it |
Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 6 Aww I seriously don't like gadge! I really love the story line it's AMAZING and it's soooooo creative but I just prefer katniss and gale! |
Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 5 I'm not a big fan of gadge but I loved the way you made her stand up to gale like that! |
Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 4 Aww! No offence to your story or anything,it's great so far..but I'm not a big fan of gadge,I prefer gale when he like katniss! And I just don't like him with madge,it doesn't suit! Madge should just stay in town, she's wayyyy too out of character - wanting to go to the woods and all,that's katniss' and gales thing and it's just crushing that tbf. |