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les4ev 5/12/12 . chapter 11
YOU HAVE NOT HAD ENOUGH REVIEWS!

so I add to the pile.

This is really beautiful, especially for a first go! You (unlike most people on ) actually know how english works, managed to work with canon rather than around it, and got everything to flow pretty well :D Nice job. Keep writing!
FineyMcFine 4/22/12 . chapter 11
Hi!

Very nicely done! I know I said this before, but I'm a sucker for sweet S4 fics and your's was excellent! It's really too bad that we didn't get to see all this goodness in canon, but if we did then we wouldn't have all of these awesome fics, so I guess it all works out. :p I like how you incorporated the stuffed puppy being from Oz and the flashback. It's little details like those that really pull everything together.

Once again GREAT JOB!
Runic Hind 4/13/12 . chapter 11
I really love how you captured the emotions, thoughts, and speech patterns of the characters. I'm surprised there haven't been more reviews for this story since it is so well written. I'll be looking for more of your work since I really like your writing style. Normally I'd add something for you to work on to improve, but I can't really pick anything out that should be worked on.
Willowtarafan4life 4/8/12 . chapter 11
This is truly beautiful writing. Please add more the pure love and need these two girls have for each other is captured amazingly in you story. PLEASE ADD MORE SOOOOOOO n!
WallflowerBitca 4/6/12 . chapter 11
I know I've already reviewed, but I have to do it again! Your fic is so amazing, it makes me all warm and fuzzy when I read it. You've totally captured their emotions and their characters and that makes it just beautiful to read. Thank you soooo much :D
fatima-thedancingdesertdish 3/12/12 . chapter 10
oh dear lord i love this fic! please write some more *puppy dog face* pweeeeese
Dirty Tube Socks 3/4/12 . chapter 8
Ha! Buffy's shirt, that was perfect.
WallflowerBitca 3/4/12 . chapter 8
Haha, this was great! I did always wonder what it was that Willow spilled on Buffy's shirt, very nice. The writing is great and you've really gotten inside their heads, I love it :)
FineyMcFine 2/26/12 . chapter 7
Hey...Just thought I'd pop in and let you know how much I'm enjoying your fic. I think you're doing a great job in keeping the characters true to themselves. I always love a good S4 'fill in the gaps' fic:) Looking forward to the next update!
CeeMaeJor 2/17/12 . chapter 4
Hi. You reviewed my story, so I thought I'd return the favor. Anyways, I really like what you've got going on here. You seem to be very good at getting into the character's heads, exploring their thoughts. I like seeing Willow and Tara's relationship develop from their point of view, and not just in the background. Keep it up!
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