Well written, compelling, and comforting. I've not seen a lot of mutant x nor read much of the fanfic, but I saw the episode this was in reference to and this story of yours drew me in to want more of the characters. You painted a picture that felt very clear and believable. Thank you. Just one thing... the rest of the story? Is it still available anywhere?

Man, very good story, I'm off to read the continuation. :)

Cool. Yeah, I always wondered why they didn't do an after affect with Brennan. I mean, other than the fact that put his anti-trust mechnasim back WAY up for a eps, but...you're totally right. What Lorna did to him WAS rape. Body, mind, soul. I love how you handled this. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

ok creepy much but it was good

wat? wats ? i wanna read the continuation!

Oh wow...this story is just great!
Are you going to do a sequel??
No matter what I'm hoping to see more Mutant X fanfics from you soon!

I love this story! Please write more! If you need a muse or new situation to use i can help!
Email me please!
Xandra/'Lectric

Considering how much I've been enjoying the Messiah strand story, I'm surprised at myself that I haven't read this sooner. Fantastic! I really felt along with Brennan and all the characters, the whole way through. You really have an excellent knack at believable character writing. Your characters become human. I've never undergone what Brennan did, but I have been depressed, and I totally identified with a lot of what you wrote.

I am a trifle concerned at this tendancy you seem to have to kill Brennan, multiple times...:D

Do you have any original writing archived anywhere? I'd love to see it. -Susan

I just read it for about and hour and a half. Damn, I couldnt stop and you should have seen my face when my computer messed up!! Man, I luv ur stories. U r my hero. Lol. Can i stalk you?? Pwease?? Keep it up, I know you are in the Messiah Strand.

I just read your story for the last 2hours. It was really good and I couldn't stop at all. Man, you got the characters! Unless I do but I focus sometimes to much on my story.
Anyway, there is nothing to be improved...
Loved it!

great introspection on brennan's character!

Loved this fanfic, especially the Brennan/Emma interaction, and because I’m a Brennan/Emma shipper I would have liked to se more romance between them at the end. :) Other than that it’s one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. Well written, good plot and great characterization.

i especially liked this chapter... i'm off to read some more!

cool story. Like the way you write. You take the time for introducing situations, for dialogues, well.. for everything a good story needs. And it's not fluffy or slash either, but something realistic (well, I'm not sure if realistic is the right word) in between.
Hope to read some more from you... (hint hint)

Very good story. I enjoyed the different emotions within the story and how you portrayed the characters. Very well written. The small parts with humor where very good as well and almost added to the seriousness of the story without those parts being serious. Very good story