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A Forgotten One 2/25/09 . chapter 1
Rilla's a goosey one. But I love the story, and I understand how horrible it is that Walter died!

And it IS nice to imagine that Walter came back for Una. But where is all the romance?

More intimacy and stuff, please...

love it...:)
Account Not Found 1/17/09 . chapter 2
WHAT? You last updated this in 2003! Please continue this story! I love Walter-Una fics, they're the reason for my Fanfiction obession. Please! I don't think W/U is written about enough, in fact Anne of Green Gables needs more fans/readers! You're the few FEW people who care enough to write about the two things in FF I love most a) Walter-Una b) Anne of Green Gables. Please continue!
A Forgotten One 11/30/08 . chapter 5
You DEFINATELY should write more!I love the "God, he's hot!" , just remember that many men really DID die in the war. They also stayed dead. I think that we all know, deep down inside, that Walter really did die and that Una never fell in love or married but not least,if this is any comfort to you,there were a hell of a lot of unmarried women after 's a fact we can't avoid no matter how much we want to.

Always keep faith

:)
Account Not Found 2/26/08 . chapter 5
omg...omg...omg...plzplzplz! write what happens to una and walter! I just LOVE walter-una fics! what happens to them? does her typhoid get better? oh please oh please oh please! *puppy-dog eyes and on knees hands clasped*

ps u might wanna make walter a tad more poetic *wink wink*

luv w.u4eva

WalterUnaForever
Account Not Found 2/26/08 . chapter 1
it's good-write a sequel!
Ciryl 4/26/05 . chapter 1
I hope that you update soon and I hope that I am magic number five to make you update! I love it when Walter is not dead, i did not like that he died in ROI, but I guess LMM did it to make the whole story more realistic.
Phillipa Gordon 9/16/03 . chapter 1
Update? Please? Must. Have. Update. I'm *dying* here! Please! *drops to her knees* I won't move off my marrow bones until you update this story! Please do it soon. This floor is awfully hard.
IrishPrincess 4/24/03 . chapter 5
I'm so glad you're still working on your stories, Marzoog! I'm looking forward to the updates - especially the one that will include Jem's and Faith's wedding.
anonymous 4/24/03 . chapter 4
Its good. I think there are some grammar mistakes in it that could be easily corrected. Personally, I think that in chap 3 (or was it 4) when Una thought, Lord he's handsome, that isn't like her at all. I mean the minister's daughter taking our Creator's name in vain? It would be terrible enough if it was someone else, but , I wouldn't use the word lightly.
Dr. Blythe 4/2/03 . chapter 4
Aw, don't just leave it there! Does she have appendisitis or what? Rheumatic fever? Typhoid? Please no to that last one, typhoid is not fun and it takes like three weeks to run it's course. *shudders* It totally bites. Anyway, Walter seems a little out of character, saying 'okay' and and 'what the heck' and stuff like that. Also the excessive amounts of punctuation is a little irritating. But I like your story. Poor Una! Make her get better soon. And update soon. Please? Please?
Overly obsessed Walter fan 3/31/03 . chapter 4
Pretty neat, I like Walter fics. He's cool. It would have been kinda interesting to have him kidnapped except: a) People were rarily kidnapped on the Island at that time, if ever. b) Why would someone kidnap Walter? Oh, wait. If someone got angry at Dr. Blythe, they might try to get back at him by stealing his long lost and finally returned son. Also that Walter wrote the Piper, and it was famous worldwide, and that probaly made someone jealous. Or maybe a soldier from the front who hated him (I'm losing control of my imagination here, can't you tell?) would try to hurt him because he was petty and hated Walter's guts and wished he had died. Or maybe another guy was jealous because Walter was sweet on Una. (that last being the least likely to have happened) But the whole kidnapping idea doesn't really fit in with the setting. Oh, and in spite of the fact that you refrained from having Una say, 'God, he's hot.' your language is still too modern in places. Such as saying 'okay'. He might have said that years later, but being Walter, I doubt he would use much slang. O my Gosh! *sees Walter's ghost lurking in the corner of the review room* He's alive! *runs to hug him* *Walter (being the nice little Victorian age boy that he is) freaks out at seeing a strange girl rushing up to hug him* *runs shrieking bloody murder from the room* Ah,well. Maybe I can find Shirley or Jem. *goes looking for one of the extremely cute Blythe boys to talk to*
anon 10/26/02 . chapter 4
it is very good so far. i like the drama. please add more
feier 9/29/02 . chapter 1
i really liked ur story...very nice ...i always wondered what would happen if walter was alive. in ur story is jem alive? i was just wondering. i guess u could say i'm a pretty big l. fan. well...keep up the good work!
iNsAnEbEl 9/14/02 . chapter 4
great chapter! nothing's going to happen to una, right? and marzoog, you're most welcome. )
Purely Graceful 9/10/02 . chapter 4
IT'S AN AWESOME STORY!

WRITE MORE, PLEAZ!

i hope this can contribute 2 ur 5 new reviews...
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