Best Fanfiction I have read so far.

omg erica fan fic is awsome and i love you jiro ill be yopur valintine

Awesome story ! Great job really !

P.S. Sorry for not updating my story I didnt know what to write . But next chapter will be up till Friday I promise.

This was AWESOME FUNNY!:D I laughed the whole time while reading it...:'D especially the part with Logi and Zola was greatXD and the n.v.d.o. :D

Aw, 'tis quite cute :3 First, I want to apologise in advance for such a... /short/ review; I don't have much time, and on top of that, I'm not really supposed to /be on this site/ due to kicking myself off/going on hiatus.

Poor Jiro; I wish he could've gotten with Kluke, but (meh) Andropov beat her to it -.- Okay, and now he's going to ask... Bouquet? D: Hehe, good luck, Jiro ;) And I kinda pity Shu in this as well xD

Shame that Jiro has no date D: Unless... you include /her/ (Anime Jiro: Cynthia is /not/ my date!) (Tsk, tsk, Jiro; you finally got a date in the end - be happy! ) Oh well... that's how the cookie crumbles xD

Well done :D The only word of advice I'd have is to add mroe detail; right now, you seem to focus more on dialogue, and while it's funny, this utlimately leads to choppiness and some readers have a hard time digesting the writing.

All in all, very cute, Mimiko

Keep it up!

Inita