i really like your writing style! very different, probably because it's so freaking amazing, haha. hope you write more! i'm also praying you get the inspiration to finish chaos theory. :D

Hee, that was adorable. Nice to see a Gray/Natsu friendship piece (sort of).

Write more! )

-jo

i loved it.

cya

what can I say? AMAZING! you have a wonderful imagination, and I can't wait for more GrayLu stories! ;D

Love the language.

As for the story... I'll have to see how it progresses. ;D

Love your stories though! (:

you should do a story when lucy keeps thinking about what gemini said to her about how hes interested and how like i dunno mira told him that lucy is interested in him and they like try to find out in the end gray says "you like NATSU and lucy says "YOU LIKE JUVIA!" and then gray says NO I LIKE YOU! and lucy gets shocked and then blushes then runs and gray goes like shit and runs after her and lucys blushing like crazy while running and then loke comes and you can right on from there if you're gonna do this fanfiction just remember, try to make it long. im drawing a doujinshi of this nothing sexual just like a sweet romance between lucy and gray cus i love them

aww... gray actually fell for natsu's "trap", but in an unexpected way! how adorable of him! makes me want to comfort him myself and tell him that "noooo, gray-kun. natsu's just being a meanie. you and lucy will touch! touch, i tell you, touch!" XD

can't wait to read what else you've got! i love that you've thought up of this collection. i know it's still just the beginning but seeing as you've written 2 of the best graylu fics so far, i'm definitely excited!

for the prompt, how about... a sick but oh-so-adorable gray getting taken care of by lucy? hehe. i'm also curious how juvia will react to their "blossoming romance". poor juvia. i've never been fond of her so *sticks out tongue*. XD

loved it :)

"Physics of touch"? *nosebleeeeeeed*

Can't believe Natsu knew that! Hihihi moooooore! :)

That was awesome. Sorry I'm not logged in properly.

I love your writing style. :D Gray is just so htstxvxhz - HOT *.*.

Can you make a fix based on possessiveness? Cliche I know, but it makes me giggle :)))) thanks so much and write more mkay? :)

HA! loved it , loved it, loved it.

you're awsome

AW!- This was extremely cute! I love it! Natsu's so evil. Gray just got pwned!

I really hope your muse gives you lots of good ideas for more stories! They're all so good! I love reading them!

Huggles! )

Amusing story you have here. X'D

I can't believe that Natsu understood that scientific explanation though. orz

Then again, he can surprise people every now and then

As for Gray, he's incredibly sulky on this fic which is amusing. Probably as amusing as Natsu showing a rare sign of intelligence.

first to review, yay!

what can i say? well, i love it. short (which I like since I have to fly in a minute). good story (it actually made sense to me). amusing (i giggled, and i know i do that alot, but natsu here is just so so very cute! gray sulking is even better!).

i was confused with the scientific explanation at the end, but that's me being poor in science. at least, i got the gist of it. damn, you're smart! XD

here's to more chapters in the near future! happy valentine's day :)

kind regards,



p.s. delicious title, by the way. _

Brilliant! (as always) i can't wait for more, and also (hopefully) an update on chaos theory! Take your time updating. (I know I do XD)

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