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| Reviews for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story |
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   GinaKim 5/6/13 . chapter 16I agree with you. Your story sucks. So is the name of Harry's brother - Albus Severus. |
| Fraulein Lover 3/28/13 . chapter 1 James is an idiot to name his son Albus SEVERUS. |
| ChaoticArisu13 3/14/13 . chapter 16 Please continue |
| dracoqueen 1/7/13 . chapter 16 I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter... |
| princess of unicorns 1/6/13 . chapter 9 Please update soon I really like the story it s really cool how's he's in raven claw and how people treat him it's really quit good |
| DHIKO 11/5/12 . chapter 2 Albus Severus? What a stupid name. For Merlin's sake, Severus called Lily a mudblood. |
| lunanargleswriter13 10/29/12 . chapter 15 this is a really cool story, this type is one of my favorites! |
| raven2547 10/9/12 . chapter 10 what a worthless chapter XD there might even be more author's note words than the actual chapter. |
| Ragged Mountains 9/30/12 . chapter 15 Wait! When did school end? How were things at the Potter house? How does Hermione know Fred? Where is Albus Potter? How was he able to use magic over the summer? When will you update? |
| Ragged Mountains 9/30/12 . chapter 14 What happened with the key room? "Hermione it's all you, you're the potions wiz." You forgot a comma and used 'your' instead of 'you're'. She studied the bottles... You forgot the 'h' in 'the'. "Now before you argue with me, just consider that this was meant for me. I need to be the one to do it." You misspelled 'consider' and your sentence structure was awkward here. "Fine. But if you're not back..." Your- possessive, you're- you are. |
| Ragged Mountains 9/30/12 . chapter 13 Where does the first half of this chapter take place? Your story is okay but it would be better id you plugged up all the plot holes. |
| Ragged Mountains 9/30/12 . chapter 12 How did they find out about Fluffy? When did they? Why is there another time skip? What happened to make them suspect Quirrell? |
| Ragged Mountains 9/30/12 . chapter 11 How did Harry and Co find out about the stone? Was there a time skip between this chapter and the last one? What was the relevance to the plot of the last chapter? What happened with Snape and McGonagall's unfair point deductions? |
| flame55 8/27/12 . chapter 15 I can't wait for more |
| ImAProudMudblood 8/25/12 . chapter 15 wow...I thought this story died.. |
