Nice story. It doesn't have a good end for the girls. But on the other hand. Bakura's finally lucky. Hehehe.

*0* I love this Fanfic!

This is probably the best fanfic I've read in a while.

I don't really have a problem with this story except that in one of the chapters I think you spelt Senpai wrong.

(Btw I'm sorry if this is a crappy review, don't normally review stuff )

You HAVE to keep going with this! Make a sequel or add more or SOMETHING! I love this story! Absolutely brilliant! I think it's really cool how Mesia was Pokii. Really amazing! Please make a sequel or fill in some things with this story! Either way would work. :)

This story is absolutely brilliant! I love it! Amazing job at getting the personalities right. I can't wait to read more and hope you update often. :]

I already left you a review on your other page, but as I said, it was still a good chapter, despite it being transitional. I can't wait for the next one; the foreshadowing is overwhelming. :3

I think I know where Ryou's been. :O Keep up the good work Harpie chan, I left a longer review on your DA since that's where I saw it first. _

You did this very well. I have read the manga so I know how this is playing out, but I love how you're interpreting it. This was such a tragic chapter, it made a proud man like me cry. Gah, I'm gonna go hug my little bro now that I've read this. :,) Thanks for the read; I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

This actually was not very boring at all. It had a lot of suspense and what-the-heck-is-going-to-happen-next feelings to it, and that makes a chapter really good, makes it the kind of thing that you just can't stop reading. And you are very good at writing that kind of thing.

Pokii sounds awesomeful; reminds me of a mutant Kirby though O.O

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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You did a good job with lengthening the chapters :D It takes a lot more time and effort to do it, but it feels worth it after you're finally done.

The only thing I'd really like to see is if you gave us a bit more insight into Mesia's thoughts. We've got some of it, but she seems like a really interesting girl with a lot on her mind, so that would be cool if we got to know her even better :)

I still adore how you describe things; the words you use and how you arrange them really work together well.

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Argh! A cliffhanger _ haha cool story so far, I absolutely love it and I'm not joking :) x Please update soon! Chloe

I just wanted to let you know that this chapter was very good. I liked it; the way you're portraying both Bakuras' personalities are dead on and I like how you're delving in of Mesia's character is coming along. She is definitely not a Mary-sue. :) The chibi Yami Bakura is interesting so I'm definitely curious as to what the future holds with his next appearances. Keep up the good work Harpie! :D

Amazingly good! You've got Ryou's personality spot on! And from what I've read of Yami Bakura, you're going to do great with his personality too! I love Mesia's character! Great story! I really hope you update often! :]

I really like this story! You're doing a great job building up to Ryou's first meeting with the spirit of the millennium ring! Can't wait to read more :)

I'm not sure which chapter you wanted me to go over or where I left off at anymore since I suck at remembering numbers, but I think this is the one I was supposed to look over (I really have no clue XD).

I think that this was really good! You have a very light-hearted style, but you really brought out the seriousness and suspense in how you chose to write this. Your descriptions are beautiful as well; I don't think I could've done so well with the Millennium Ring XD (I wouldn't know what to refer to the teethy-things as lol). I'd love it if you could make the chapters a bit longer or try to put a bit more of Mesia's thinking into this, but I think that they're wonderful the way that you've got it :)

*TY*

Great chapters! I'm really looking forward to more!