Awesome chapter!(:

Love the chapter, but please let Alan be more hurt than he seems.

Please update soon.

Nice chapter. Always enjoy coming home and having a new chapter to read. Going to be a busy week. 60hrs scheduled. Hope no one calls in sick! Hope you have a nice holiday and week. Will anxiously be looking forward to next chapter. I think Virgil and Sarah would be a fine choice. :)

Hopefully that's it for twisters, destroying the house would have been awful. So many memories dusted with painful new ones!

Best birthday ever. Hey Scott? Just need that first grey hair to appear...

Omg plz makke it better...they are soooo close to being safe...and it would be totally awesome if virgil and sarah answered nxt(I'm using my cell to review sorry for the bad spelling.) Any way awesome chapter as always my only question is how are they going to get the truck down after all is said and done lol.

oohs sorry i missed the last chapter. Guess i have been really busy the last few days. please forgive me lol. anyway this is a really good chapter and a nice easy one for that. But i don't think this going to be ride for Alan lol. anyway make sure you update soon xxxxx

Yay! They've been found. Now to get Alan some help. Pooor Ali! And poor Scott. What a birthday surprise... NOT.

WOW...new chapter so fast I didn't get to respond to the last one. I like it :) Great chapter and everyone's alive and safe, but knowing you I guess I should add "for now'. Keep up the good work, looking foward to what comes next.

Yay! New chapter! So glad to see it :) That was FAST!

Of course I loved it. Tornados scare the bejabbers outta me, I'm so glad everyone made it through.. for now. Your author note scared me a bit.

Still, It's a huge relief that although things were destroyed, the familie's ok. You know, they've been through an awful lot in the last 17 chapters... poor ducks.

I can't wait to see what comes next!

* hands Sarah and Virgil a loaf of Potato Bread and a box of home made Creampuffs.* Here.. share. :) you could use a treat.

Better Virgil and Sarah respond than Emily again. *pouting* Yes, I'm still whining about that one, CC.

Poor Jean, she's not had a good day and now her truck is in a tree. Bet that will be fun to explain to the insurance people. lol

I'm still not breathing easy yet cos you haven't finished the story and I know just how evil you can be.

Amazing and awesome chapter! I love this story! I can't wait to read more of your exciting and amazing and awesome story! Have a great and wonderful day!

Love the newest chapter:) I literally snorted then carried on like a psycho laughing my head off when reading the 'Twister' references. Automatically knew where you were getting it from; great movie.. Isn't it funny that they look the same ayexD

Love it, love your stories, and most importantly love Alan torture:P Keep up the amazing writing:)

Ninja

Hehehehe! Oops. I like the door part. Virgil should keep it as a reminder. And the SUV. Hahahaha! Shame. I know that a twister are bad but this one made me laugh. I can just see the door in my minds eye. Sorry Virgil but your a funny Mental image. Awe Johny boy. I'm happy for you. :-) Hehehe!

"I shot Toto!" Jean yelled in return as she pulled on TJ's arm. "Now if you don't want to join the dog, get your ass in gear!" Now I get why Scott and Jeannie are such tight friends; they both get threaten-ny when they're worried.

I'm getting worried here. Give the poor things a break will ya? Aw, Jeez; I'm wasting my breath. You never listen to me anyway.

Kate really isnt compatible with pregnancy genes is she? Don't kill me for saying this Kate- but she really isn't totally on the ball there. I loved the line '"I am worried about the baby…Oh," Kate lamely answered. "You mean my baby, not Alan. Scott will be so upset if we can't find Alan alright."' You can tell that she's falling asleep there.

I liked that little glimpse away from all the full-on action stuff. Looking forward to the next part, and I think Virge and Sarah-Jane is fine, but I still. Want. Jeannie! *Stamps foot*

See you next time, CC! Xx

I didn't even get the chance to review the last one! I'll have to go back for that...

Man, their week just keeps getting better and better, doesn't it? Sniggering over Millie calling Johnny a ding-dong... What a goose, John for not being able to read minds!

Oh dear; poor Jeff. He's gone into panic-mode now. Jeannie's truck is in a tree and Alan clearly isn't responsive...

Oh, and happy birthday Scooter; you haven't gotten the best present so far, have you?

Great update CC; a pleasant surprise, and expect the chapter sixteen one in a minute! Xx