Come on where is the rest of you story! It ha sheen at least one minute and you haven't posted another chapter! :p I want to see what happens to Lucy and to Colton! In the way to described he sounds a little like Alex from Delirium so POST

Eeeeeewwwwww that is disgusting! A tube?! What the heck ( not as in stop writing kind of what the heck) is that from?! I luv but hate the idea if you know what I mean :p

Its not a bad story

I can't believe you haven't even updated this yet. WE NEED TO WORK ON THIS!

I loved the first part of your story!
Please write some more quickly!

Dude. Please, please, please tell me that your previous title was a Les Mis reference. Please. You will have made a young, Miserables-obsessed little nerd very very happy.

This is a really good story and I LOVE legend. But...the chapters are super short, but at least theres a story about the chapters coming

Sincere apologies for not logging in, Darling-life's hard, I'm rushing... the list goes on, and on, and on.

Though this was short, it was fast-paced, but as one of the reviewers below have said, I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep 'em coming, but make sure they're longer. Good luck!

This is awesome! write more! i just finished reading Legend and I'm obsessed so this fic is amazing!

Keep Going, I love love loooove Legend.

I like it! Go into a little more, though. ut other than that, great!

Finally, a Legend fanfic! I can't wait to see where this goes, just be careful not to make it too much like the book. Great job so far though.