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I like eeveelutions. I own all. Cept from D/P. I'm raising them for trainer hill.

I like it, saddening, gives chills, perfect story in my book. You should make a sequal of what happens to Light's child and if he/she wishes to return. Or if the fued between the darkness and light will ever end between these two types of Pokemon.

I know that a writer with your imagination and creativity will do great if you thought of trying these ideas out.

its good, though i didn't realize they were umbreons...

yeah, i understand the title and great fic!

Hey, that last line sounds really similar to a passage in the Bible. Are you alluding to that, or does it mean something else?

Never mind my last review, Farla, if you're reading this.

NOW I get it - "Yea though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death..."

Got a question. You don't believe in God, and that's okay with me, even though it isn't with some idiots. But do you believe in a 'higher power' at all? Just wondering. No harm meant, by the way.

SilverShadow the Crazy One

(Curse the baka who decided on the policy of one review a chapter!)

The mother was an Espeon, wasn't she? And the 'demons' were the Umbreon, weren't they? Misunderstood Dark types... I hate it. Darks are probably the most understanding of all about the balance betwixt Light and Darkness, yet they are feared. Hunted. Destroyed. Thousands upon thousands, dead by human hands, simply because they do not understand... *Dragon girl teleports in from out of nowhere, looking rather ticked off. Authoress walks in from stage left.*

That's probably correct, isn't it, Silver? *Guardian Voice nods. Authoress bows before the greatness that is Farla*

Hey, Miss Farla, do you think you could possibly read my one Pokemon story for me? It's only part-way finished, but I'd probably be indebted to you forever. Email me if you'll read it, topic Finding Balance, Finding Fate, 'kay?

Thanks for reading this. Signing off.

I like it. A neat concept having the umbreons(and jolteons?) ostrisized from the group like that.

I liked it! Eeveelutions and the concepts of the conflicts that must occur between them are so facinating to me... I have a lot of odd RPG characters and run games where there are battles between angels and demons...but which side is really good or evil? Sometimes, as the all-wise Yossarian once said, "When light is dimmed and shadow is illuminated, everything becomes a shade of grey. When good intentions become warped and cruel motives prove their nobiliy, good and evil can lose all meaning." _ Go read Yossarian's stuff, it's great! Although, if you're not into the more bloody and depressing breed of Pokemorph fiction, don't read any of "The End of the Road" or "The Beginning of the Road" because you won't like it... but I do! _

-Dark

I don't understand the title, but i'm a dense little person, so don't mind me. The story was brilliant again, very imaginative.

Very original idea! I love the perspective, though I am a bit confused on how the child of Light got taken by the Umbreons when Light herself did not get taken. Was it an 'exchange' for the favor granted to her when she was a child? And were the eevees in this 'colony' all turned into Espeons? (I've always wondered if there was a sort of war/rivalry/whatever going on between Esps&Umbs.)I really liked this! Thanks for the read.

Um, there's nothing wrong with having an allusive title. I personally like it. Those who get it, may enjoy it; those who don't, don't have too much to worry about.

The eevelution-tribe's logic is quite convincing, and again, pleasantly subtle. This story has a good flow from beginning to conclusion. I also like the way the narrative starts through the mother's eyes and draws back gradually so that we can see the flaws in her beliefs.

Good fic. Several stars awarded. :) :). (Oh, hi, L-S).

Sweeeeeeeeett...I take it she's an Espeon, and one of her children was taken and evolved into an Umbreon. Wow...I'm impressed (as always). AND I'M THE FIRST ONE TO REVIEW! MWAH-HA! *very happy for no reason*