Brent isn't going to be like Bryce, Shaw or Cole so I'm curious to know how he's going to be and I'm glad that Sarah didn't spend much time with him, :)

actually I liked this story. Think you should of ended it before they all became a team and started a follow up though. But yea I like this story, but you can kind of see that Brent is kind of Bryce in a way.

Glad that we got out of the way even though I'm sure he wont give up that easy. Good chapter.

Voted and done on your poll.

Good chapter, this was my favourite one of your stories, I love them all but this one stood out for me and change of heart. I'm not sure why you included Brent into the story tbh but in all your stories the charah is strong and dominates the story. So I trust it will be good! Looking forward to the next chapter

A little short, yes, but still good. Things with Brent should be interesting. Good job!

While angst like this is fine, for me at least (I like it when Sarah shoots people down), just make sure there is never any doubt in Sarah's mind who she loves. Also, long updates are far better in these tense situations, even if there are bigger gaps between updates.

NOOOO your wrong this fic is not liked the least for me it's one of the top! :)) again great chapter the angst makes it a more realistic story

First of all that is not fair LLC, I can not vote simply because I love ALL YOUR STORIES! (LOL)

Second, sorry for going nuclear on you about Brent but it does look like our boy will cause trouble at some point. Some where in this story I predict a Chuck and Brent confrontation. Personally I have no problem with Chuck kicking someones ass.

Thank you for this update.

Can you stop insulting your own work, please? The constant self deprecation is starting to get on my nerves a little.

Well, that was nice, Sarah immediately telling this guy off and making it clear that she wants nothing to do with him. I still don't like the guy, though.

until next time,

coreymon77

I loved this chapter. I loved how another one of Sarah's boyfiends in the agency has come back to try to reclaim her. This time it is Brent. I loved how Hannah was trying to calm Chuck down. Please continue.

PS your PM is not working. There is no link available. Your poll is too hard. I loved all your works equally. I love your writing. Please continue.

Keep up the writing and it a good story

Hmm...For someone who claimed that Brent was not going to be a problem? Are we about to witness a confrontation between Chuck and your Brent?

What I am also kind of surprised is why this guy there is at all? You never mentioned him as anything. Oh by the way Cole was the best of the bunch. At least he did show Chuck respect and backed off when he realized that Sarah was in love Chuck.

I just think you are creating a little angst for whatever reason. We will see where you go with this, as of now I am somewhat skeptical.

nice job! Thanks

oh god, not only do we have Hannah and Carina going after Chuck, we also have this Brent guy most likely trying to go after Sarah. I completely trust you on the Charah front, nothing bad is going to happen with those two and we will continue to get the amazing Charah sweetness you have been giving us so far, but oh god. This is going to get messy, isn't it? :P

One quick thing though. Carina might be competitive in the way that she loves to take what Sarah wants, but she truly is Sarah's friend and would never actually try to take what Sarah already has. She just wouldn't do that. Yes, she is Carina and will act as such, but she would never actually try to get between Chuck and Sarah.

And have I mentioned how much I adore the first part of this chapter? Chuck and Sarah are seriously the most adorable, amazing couple ever! I love them so much! Chuck and Sarah just being all in love and domestic and couple-y are some of my favourite moments ever! :D

until next time,

coreymon77

Great chapter. Look forward to next update