Awe I love this it brought tears to my eyes!

Powerful last line.

It made me cry.

How you've managed to pore this much of deep emotion in less than 300 words is absolutely uncanny - it had me in tears almost. You truly are very talented.

As lean and strong as the women they depict, these are exquisite pen and ink drawings - devoid of frills and beautifully balanced.

So wonderfully bittersweet. I love it.

A power packed pair of drabbles, beautifully executed, beautifully touching. I love the history between these two wrong women that you hint at with the line about besotted teenagers, and the contrasts between air and earth, falling and flying.

Love, lust, and the specter of loss... what a lot to pack into these tiny vignettes.

Flying... oh my. You almost convince me that you've done it yourself.

And then the terrifying moment in the middle of the night, which all of us know who've lived long enough. Eventually, there will be an end.

Superb as always.