|Reviews for Love & War|
| timey-wimey detector 3/8/11 . chapter 11
They're so adorable...sigh...its kind of a good thing they haven't confessed yet.
| timey-wimey detector 3/7/11 . chapter 9
Please please please double check your Japanese. They aren't huge errors, but with Japanese, the smallest changes can change the whole meaning, so be careful. A funny example of this would be the difference between house or in certain situations "my" (uchi), and ,for lack of a better word, poo (unchi), is one letter. I'm not saying this to be mean, because if I didn't like your story I wouldn't be reading it. ;D
| Shinwa-Tsuki 1/1/11 . chapter 10
You should go back and deal with page 10 needs quotations, ellipses, and such - including style correction - it doesn't match the rest of the story style. Some of the style may already be there - the bold and the italics.
If you need a beta, I could help with grammar and spellings, as well as some other things such as the punctuation marks.
| kokoronagomu 10/29/10 . chapter 13
it is always a pleasure to find such a gem -it's my sole reason for combing the 'rk' archives.
kokoronagomu. deviantart. com
| Hotaru Himura 9/30/10 . chapter 13
amazing and beautiful i loved it. :D
| noname00 4/17/10 . chapter 13
Im so glad I found this fic, it was great
| kidokogoro 4/12/10 . chapter 2
The Inn that Kenshin stayed in at this point in time was the Ikedeya I believe. It may have been the Kohagi but I can't rememeber. But yes Okami was the Inn Keper that Kenshin was so close to during the revolution. If i'm not mistaken I believe Kenshin only ever spoke to her and Katsura in length.
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 13
aww :) Great story :)
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 6
this was such a good chapter :) OK, on to reading more :)
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 2
This story is so great :) I am totally loving it so far :) Ok, must read more :)
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 1
oh my gosh, this story is so interesting so far :) can't wait to read more _x
| Sonia120462 9/2/08 . chapter 13
| savagewolfdemon22 4/11/08 . chapter 13
can you PLEASE make a sequl to this story? i really want to know how shiori and soujiro's relationship turns out!
| rurouni dee 3/19/08 . chapter 13
I absolutely loved this fic. I love how the characters still held their personalities (from the manga/anime) and I especially liked that Kenshin was able to move on (w/ Kaoru) in the end.
This fic was very well written. I enjoyed it immensely. I hope you continue to write! )
| poems2songs 9/11/07 . chapter 13
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...