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| Reviews for Love & War |
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   timey-wimey detector 3/8/11 . chapter 11They're so adorable...sigh...its kind of a good thing they haven't confessed yet. |
| timey-wimey detector 3/7/11 . chapter 9 Please please please double check your Japanese. They aren't huge errors, but with Japanese, the smallest changes can change the whole meaning, so be careful. A funny example of this would be the difference between house or in certain situations "my" (uchi), and ,for lack of a better word, poo (unchi), is one letter. I'm not saying this to be mean, because if I didn't like your story I wouldn't be reading it. ;D |
| Shinwa-Tsuki 1/1/11 . chapter 10 You should go back and deal with page 10 needs quotations, ellipses, and such - including style correction - it doesn't match the rest of the story style. Some of the style may already be there - the bold and the italics. If you need a beta, I could help with grammar and spellings, as well as some other things such as the punctuation marks. |
| kokoronagomu 10/29/10 . chapter 13 it is always a pleasure to find such a gem -it's my sole reason for combing the 'rk' archives. delighted, ginny kokoronagomu. deviantart. com ټ |
| Hotaru Himura 9/30/10 . chapter 13 amazing and beautiful i loved it. :D |
| noname00 4/17/10 . chapter 13 Im so glad I found this fic, it was great |
| kidokogoro 4/12/10 . chapter 2 The Inn that Kenshin stayed in at this point in time was the Ikedeya I believe. It may have been the Kohagi but I can't rememeber. But yes Okami was the Inn Keper that Kenshin was so close to during the revolution. If i'm not mistaken I believe Kenshin only ever spoke to her and Katsura in length. |
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 13 aww :) Great story :) |
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 6 this was such a good chapter :) OK, on to reading more :) |
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 2 This story is so great :) I am totally loving it so far :) Ok, must read more :) |
| Nadya Lubov 8/26/09 . chapter 1 oh my gosh, this story is so interesting so far :) can't wait to read more _x |
| Sonia120462 9/2/08 . chapter 13 aw...so cute! |
| savagewolfdemon22 4/11/08 . chapter 13 can you PLEASE make a sequl to this story? i really want to know how shiori and soujiro's relationship turns out! |
| rurouni dee 3/19/08 . chapter 13 I absolutely loved this fic. I love how the characters still held their personalities (from the manga/anime) and I especially liked that Kenshin was able to move on (w/ Kaoru) in the end. This fic was very well written. I enjoyed it immensely. I hope you continue to write! ) |
| poems2songs 9/11/07 . chapter 13 wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work... |
