I like it a LOT. you're really good

Hey! I liked this story very much! Especially your choose of words...here... "had stolen her heart and hadn’t even the decency to give it back. Not that she minded. He could keep it for the rest of her life." It's great. I hope that you will continue this...

Maria

Aww. Very sweet. I liked this. :)

Nice bit of reflections.

Lovely! I think Padme's thoughts are dead on. I hope you write more.

AWWWWWWW. it's so sweet.

This was very good!

-Ali

VERY nice! It could've used more smooching and MORE Anakin in my opinion lol but it was really good :)

Sweet and simple, I liked it.

That was awesome. You wrote it very well and really captured her personality well. Very good job!

i like this alot!

I like it...but the dialogue at the end seemed...as an excess?

A wonderful passage. Very beautiful, descriptive use of lanaguage. I was actually about to do a piece just like this one, but looks like you just beat me to it! ;p

You're a great writer!

Awww, so sweet. Simple, short,and funny. perfect and realistic. DO u think you could also review my story, Complicated?

I like it! Cool story.