| Reviews for With the Ultimate Idiot |
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AkixMinami 6/15/13 . chapter 8 When's the next chapter coming? |
Yoky2cool4u 3/3/13 . chapter 8I don't want it to end soon either! I love the AikoxKouta moment you have in there. Please Update! |
ItsComplicatedOkay 3/3/13 . chapter 8This was a very... random chapter, but was nice nevertheless. Please continue! |
Anon 2/3/13 . chapter 7 Update... please... Update... I'm begging you... |
esmeraldaxx200 1/12/13 . chapter 7AGAIN! Sigue! |
Guest 1/2/13 . chapter 1 it was great:) |
Wolf Strife 1/3/13 . chapter 7way to poison Aki, Lol. I like it keep it up man. |
leo 12/26/12 . chapter 7 Its really good so keep making more chapters please for the sake of all the readers please finish it. |
ItsComplicatedOkay 12/12/12 . chapter 7This is a great story! It could use more editing though, 'cause in some parts, the grammar and spelling is a little off. This happens especially during some of Hideyoshi's lines. The Ye Olde English grammar is wromg, with you mixing up your "Thou" and "Thee". Anyway, this has a great plot (Barely any AkiXYuuko fics out there), and I hope to see more chapters! Fight on! |
green rupee 11/28/12 . chapter 7Lol I loved this chapter Update soon! |
Inceres 11/28/12 . chapter 7 Hey, it's me again. Hope you are okay with this review. That was a nice plan going on, with great progression. The tension and chemistry between Yuuko and Akihisa, in my opinion, was developed realistically. There was a great deal of insecurity, with him being a F-class student, and her being generally in love with him. Her personality seems to be slightly overwhelming at times, but even though her aggravation might be exaggerated, I can sympathize with this character. As for him, he showed remarkable observance, picking up all the signals. He does deserve a slap though, for interpreting everything wrongly! This is the same feeling one gets when one sees another attempting to read a book upside down. I feel rather frustrated. The Ultimate Idiot remains idiotic, point taken. Overall, another satisfying chapter! () |
Inceres 11/18/12 . chapter 2 Harro, Magician Under The Moonlight! I came across So Far Yet So Close one day and decided to read a couple of your other fan-fictions, so here I am! I have reviewed under other names, which I unfortunately cannot remember. (Or will not?) But that's not the point. Out of all that I have read, this is the one that I enjoyed the best. You're very adept at handling romance, dear Mr Magician. I felt that the timing (unlike the EXTREMELY numerous and hyperactive characters in Primo's Will braying like drunken donkeys all the time) was brilliant with this one. There were parts that were genuinely funny, and parts that were humorous. With The Ultimate Idiot definitely needs more chapters! Be doing more reviews in the future Good luck! ( ・ω・) |
xComma 11/7/12 . chapter 6CONTINUE PLEASE! :) |
green rupee 8/20/12 . chapter 6loved it! |
DarkXDestiny 8/17/12 . chapter 5Please UPDATE it.. This is getting intresting XD |