Aww a happy ending! I'm glad they finally had that second child!

Great ending

Katherine's action to spare Jane is admirable, she is about to die and yet, she wants justice! I loved how Edward stood with Katherine as well!

Ah Katherine will be the 5th queen! Maybe her cousins can stop her beheading this time!

Awesome idea! Anne of Cleves was spared misery of not being be able to marry by not marrying Henry!

I love this story, and have loved it from the beginning. It's an interesting concept and I like George and Jane having a happy marriage...And, I'm glad that Jane didn't have to die right away, she's a good character in this story.

I also really love Anne marrying Henry Percy. Nice little touch there. She deserves to be happy too! I love stories where she gets her happy ending too...And I SO hope she has enough sense to say no to the king. He had his chance and it passed. Besides, she's remarried. He can't do that!

I absolutely hate to nitpick and understand that it's your tale and you can do what you want, but I have to ask, does everyone HAVE to have SONS? I was SO hoping for girls for Anne and Jane(or at least ONE of them)...I know sons are fandom cliché but I always thought Elizabeth needed a little sister-at least as far as this fandom is concerned. *Sigh* (I know I'm biased-but that's a story for another time.)

Aside from my own nitpick, it's a great, cute little tale and I can't wait to see where you go with it. You deserve a cookie! XD *Gives cookie and crosses fingers for daughters in the future*

This is getting good

Uh oh...I don't see this ending well...at all... Anne's going to want to Stay with Henry Percy, isn't she? I hope she's got more sense than to go back to Henry...

hell no, king Henry didn't just say that! how can he expect Anne to come back when he set her aside for his mistress? I love Anne/king Henry pairing but sometimes he's too egoistical! (sorry for bad english, it isn't my native lenguage)

nooo...their relationship was so perfect...

Poor George and Jane, I hope that their baby will survive!

I hope Jane and George can still be together!

\"As you have so willingly and graciously submitted to me, I will grant your request," Henry told Anne. "You do realize, of course, that as our marriage will therefore be declared null and void, your daughter Elizabeth will be considered a bastard and will no longer be in the line of succession to the throne."\ She wouldn't if could be a marriage of good faith! Mary could've had the same thing if Henry was kind enough.

Cool! good work

I really like this story!