|Reviews for elements|
| mogue 6/4/12 . chapter 1
You literally had me laughing out loud several times. This line got me first:
and… was he feeling what he thought he was under his leg?
She looked at him and he could feel the foolishness. "Really. I'll just… get a branch or" – the one he had broke – "another one." She verged on annoyance. "Just leave me. It's alright." Exasperation.
Can sooo see Florence's face.
She didn't answer, didn't even look at him, just placed her hands flat a few inches from his wounded abdomen, palms down.
"What the hell?" He grabbed her hands and her eyes flew open angrily.
I think I like this because it's so accurate to what we would have seen in the show.
Or maybe she had a general disregard for life. Her life, he meant.
Made me laugh.
There were more but I'll just say I really love your imagery and how well you capture the characters. I'm about to post a full length HR fic and I was so very, very happy to see your contribution here. This show really could have had an amazing fanfic following if FOX wasn't made up of a bunch of idiots.
Off to read more.