|Reviews for A fine line between love and success|
| curbsidepuke 3/4/13 . chapter 53
Very interested in the season five story that was mentioned in the end notes!
| Jarnac50 12/3/12 . chapter 53
I've spend the last week reading both your stories back to back and I have to say that I'm in love with them. You have so much talent, I can't stop thinking about them. Your plot line is amazing and your characters are perfect. I'm a HUGE Dylan and Brenda fan, and I just love the way you keep having them always being there for each other, and not having them be with anybody else. BUT I'm really annoyed with Dylan ever since Suzanne came in the picture, the way he treated Brenda and Jim is just not right. At this point, I think he deserves to lose all of his money and Brenda, but I don't want him to hand-up like on the show, drunk and bitter. And I don't really want Brenda to stay in London after the summer. I've got to admit, personally, I'm not that much into the David and Donna thing - David has been such a jerk from the beginning of your story that I don't really care about him. I'm more anxious to found out what's going to happen to Dylan's money and his relationship with Brenda.
I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to found out what happens next. And, I want to know if you still plan on writing the third part of this story, like you wrote you would in one of your note. I hope you do, cause I can't get enough of reading your stories.
| J 11/21/12 . chapter 53
Good chapter! Can't wait to read more.
| Puckleberryfan82 11/20/12 . chapter 53
I am still reading this
Please post more soonish
| Princesakarlita411 11/20/12 . chapter 53
will dylan and brenda ever get together again
will val cause drama for them
| sg90210 11/20/12 . chapter 53
Welcome back! Great chapter...can't wait to read what happens next! :)
| brankel1 11/20/12 . chapter 53
no please no Val.I didn't like when they brought her on the show.
| Kar 11/19/12 . chapter 53
Love your story! Read all of it recently, can't wait for more and was so happy for a new chapter.
| brendylan 11/19/12 . chapter 53
nice job! I almost cried with Brenda. :( I loved it though. Cant have a good story without some angst and goodness knows Brenda and Dylan always had plenty of that. And definitely could see both of them reacting the way they did even if it was sad that Dylan walked away instead of talking to her.
Poor Donna. But I have to say I am so glad Scott didnt stop Donna from finding out what a scum David was. :) You go Scott! I feel bad for him feeling caught in the middle and he doesnt even know the worst part of the evening...that Kelly left town. But at least he gets a cruise out of this. hehehe. I'm happy he won it. Now, who is he going to carry with him? hhmmmmm... I have a cool thought on this. I cant wait to see if I guess right.
And too funny that Brandon and Kelly walk out of the elevator to Claire and Lucinda's plotting. Always wondered how Kelly was able to find out Brandon's room number. That was a great way to do it. Of course, I have no idea how it really happened in the show...I didnt watch that part. At that point in the eppys, I didnt really care that much about Brandon OR Kelly so I think I blocked out pretty much all of that. lol
Again, great job as always. CAnt wait to see how you wrap it up.
| Guest 10/28/12 . chapter 52
wow. definite differences here than onscreen but I like it. I could so see Dylan reacting this way to Brenda's decision to leave especially after his confrontation with Jim. Cant wait to see where you go from here. And so glad Scott called David on his idiotic behavior. Go Scott! I also enjoyed Brandon getting rid of Lucinda and Claire. "Go get some ice cream" too funny. lol Great job!
| Puckleberryfan82 10/26/12 . chapter 52
| Jen 10/24/12 . chapter 52
Can't wait to read more about Brandon and Kelly!
| Princesakarlita411 10/24/12 . chapter 52
cant wait 4 more
| brankel1 10/24/12 . chapter 52
Love is a jerk.
| brankel1 10/18/12 . chapter 51