 Rurrlock-God of Power 5/30/12 . chapter 21Things are really starting to get interesting now, love how you're slowly unfold the story and the characters, makes me excited to see more. Can't wait, awesome job with this chapter!) |
 Silvermoonlight GJ 5/29/12 . chapter 21Juliette is really surprising me now she told Leandros to go after Gabrielle which will turn everything upside down if Xena walks in and finds him kissing her and she also a suspect to a murder ether this is one hell of a clever plan on her part or she has everyone fooled. |
 Stardawn19 5/28/12 . chapter 3Ha! Just thought of something. Xena let Gabreille catch the guy. She knew that he was hovering over her before he moved to Gabrielle's side. Apparently Gabreille didn't catch that fact.. at least not yet. Bravo for her to boosting Gabreille confidence.
I do like how the story is progressing though, a strange town, people hard to get along with, and and old friend of Xena's in trouble. Good plot devices so far, you're setting up a good solid story line :) |
 Stardawn19 5/28/12 . chapter 2You have the characters nailed so well. I can see an early Gabrielle, just starting to become confident in her abilities, and a still cocky Xena who gets a kick out of teasing her. The whole scene with the staff was wonderfully done, and then the scene where Gabrielle gets upset and Xena keeps her from harming the boy is also well done. |
 Emeloo2 5/28/12 . chapter 21I'm liking him less and less...
Thank You for the update! X] |
 Kikilia14 5/28/12 . chapter 21Okay- what is Juliette up to? Very nice twist.
Enjoyed it. :) |
 Jhoi Marie Boli 5/24/12 . chapter 8Yeah, this IS getting darker.
I can totally feel it in your writing.
You are good at serious and mystery.
xDxD
Glad that Leandros has not been beeaten in this chapter.
It's a start of maybe something friendshippy?
LOL
And whatever that THing was with that priest, was it also around those elderly villagers?
Or are those people really just that messed-up wanting to see Gabrielle and Leandros fight?
What's their beef?
Haha
And was it only the priest's personality that was changed when that thing was there?
Or was it that THAt thingy was speaking through the priest?
ROFL
I'm not sure if these questions are important..
Heheh.
I will just have to keep on reading to find out if they'll be answered. |
 Hydrocity3 5/22/12 . chapter 7I wonder what Gabrielle saw? Aside from that Leondros is always in the wrong place at the wrong time. That seems to be a recurring theme. I hope it continues. |
 Hydrocity3 5/20/12 . chapter 6I only have this to say... we don't talk about about Joxer. XD. |
 Hydrocity3 5/20/12 . chapter 5The intereactions between the characters with a hint of fluff. Really good chapter. |
 Rurrlock-God of Power 5/19/12 . chapter 20Loved it...that's my review :) Nah, kidding here's the rest.
I loved this one as well, it was written really well yet again, especially the flashback with Xena and Selena. You can really feel what the characters are going through with how you write, well done. Awesome stuff, can't wait for more! :D |
 Emeloo2 5/19/12 . chapter 20Loved it! |
 Silvermoonlight GJ 5/19/12 . chapter 20That was a real surprise I did not expect Xena to get drunk and do that, but strangle I don't blame ether of them because it across as old history and feels more like them just finishing of unfinished business as both don't see it as a romance or relationship, but this will turn everything upside down for Gabrielle as she may completely misinterpret it and go and do something really stupid. Can't wait for more :D |
 Kikilia14 5/18/12 . chapter 20Very interesting especially the memory. Am wondering if Gabrielle is ever going to catch a clue. :) |
 Hydrocity3 5/16/12 . chapter 4The description in this chapter is so well thought out. Lol at Xena and Selena walking in on Gabrielle. Anyway, I'll try to R&R more of it as time allows. *Stare!* Boobies... uh... forget I said anything. |