Its wonderful

This has got to be one of the cutest fanfictions i have ever read in my life!

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oh aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeesomee i love made me cry you are really gooood

The cutest story so cute :) wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I loved it

Great story, very very cute. :)

Oh my word! This was AMAZING! You did a wonderful job at writing this fiction! Great job!

-noms on cookie-

Yay, this is the first Rave fanfic I've ever read! It's a huge shame that there are almost no fanfics for Rave. Amazing manga, I only just finished it today.

Anyway, I loved this story. After seeing the picture of Elie and Haru getting married, you want to know what happens beforehand, right? It was really sweet and funny at the same time. I had to laugh at the way Haru proposed in a casino.

Ah, I gotta go now, so I'll cut this short. I loved the story, the writing was great and flowed smoothly. I also appreciate stories with length, and this was a very long oneshot. YAY!

I have no words because of my amazing joy of this story and my crying won't stop. I love this Manga and this story caught it. I will read this story everyday, if I can, then play my Rave Master games or read the Manga. Rave Master isn't my #1 favorite but this couple's love is stronger than any other manga. I love this Story!

epic story.

Okay, you have to know something about me before I review this. I NEVER cry at the ends of books or movies. Ever. It just does not happen.

But here I am, sitting on my bed, trying not to cry.

HOLY MOTHER OF RA YOU ARE FANTASTIC.

I loved this story from beginning to end. :'3

AMAZINGGGGGGG!

Awww, that was just lovely :)

I loved how you included almost all the characters in this. In fact, I want this to actually be what happens in the RM universe! They were all in character, and you juggled all their different roles very effectively. Man, I had to laugh when Ruby told Elie of Haru's plan - it was just so... Ruby XD Gotta love that lovable goofball (and we can always forgive him for messing up, since we know everything'll turn out fine in the end anyway )

The mood you set was also very RM-like. The casual way that Haru just disregarded tradition and went to see Elie, because he couldn't resist, was very sweet. I liked how you made Belnika as the "voice of reason" in this one, saving Elie from further embarrassment by Julia and Cat - thought that was a good balance of personalities :) And oh-em-gee, how Haru proposed to her... hiding the ring in the gamble winnings and proposing to her in the casino... That was absolutely BRILLIANT! I couldn't have thought up a better way! In fact, while reading through it, I tried to think up a unique way for Haru to propose, and I couldn't. So you pulled it off brilliantly with an awesome and sweet idea. Trying to find a place where Elie felt most comfortable in was really considerate of Haru and Musica, and it was rather meaningful as well. Haru wasn't the only lucky one - Elie was lucky too, and she "won" him.

The only thing that bothered me was at the end of the reverand's/priest's speech, when he said "I now present to you Mr. and Mrs. Haru Glory!" Shouldn't it just be "Mr. and Mrs. Glory"? I'm not sure, I could be wrong, so sorry XD

The wedding was so adorable. I wondered if you were actually at a wedding recently - the detail was incredible. Haru - not good with words? WHAT A LIAR! I liked how you made the proposal speech long, and then his actual vows a mere two sentences. It was a good contrast, and I liked how his words weren't merely repeated like a script. Their vows, really, were almost poetry :)The humour at the end, as well, also gave that overall sense of contentedness and happiness. It was just so lovely, and what I would love to think actually happened. Writing style was awesome and the story flowed very nicely. Awesome work! :D

I can't even begin to describe how amazing this is. I didn't wanna stop reading! I was a little sad when I was finished it. I even shed a few tears at the wedding scene. You're an amazing writer. Keep it up! I'd love to read more Rave fanfic:) 33