|Reviews for Chaos|
| mr rophone 5/7/13 . chapter 51
THAT WAS F***ING AWESOME!
I can be quite critical when it comes to fan fictions, but I have to admit that was an amazing story with the perfect balance of romance, tragedy, war, fantasy, adventure and a lot of other things too. This is such a great story I'm having a hard time getting it out of my head that this isn't the official 5th book. But at the same time its not paolini's writing, its yours so it is completely unique. It is amazing that you managed to finish this; 52 considerably long chapters of pure genius. I am saying this as someone who can be quite hard to impress. : )
| mr rophone 5/6/13 . chapter 44
A lovely way to bring arya back. But a huge rock sticking out of your stomach/chest would be very uncomfortable for eragon don't you think?
And what about if she got pregnant again? She has a huge rock taking up half of her stomach already.
And I can't imagine she would be able to move comfortably with a solid rock passing through the centre of her chest. She wouldn't even be able to bend over properly.
But it was a heartwarming sentiment to have the nickname intimately given to her by her mate as her actual lifeline.
| Bloodthirsty Omega 5/4/13 . chapter 51
Man that was definitely one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Hats off to you DomesticHouseCat! I just read 51 chapters in one night (woah O.O). I've never read that quick before. I was just halfway through Eldest (for, like, the twentieth time) when I discovered this fanfic. By the end, the picture you painted was so perfect that I can't go back to Eldest for quite some time. Thanks for a great story, and keep writing! Looking forward to other Inheritance fanfics, especially a sequel to this one. Sé onr sverdar sitja hvass!
| Guest 5/3/13 . chapter 23
You used Jierda wrong. Jierda is the word for 'break', so it isn't a spell that could be used to blast opponents away.
| Slanderman 4/26/13 . chapter 1
I have to say dude, this story is AMAZING. It might even be better than inheritance. And ExA actually happend in this.
| GaaraSandNiN 4/23/13 . chapter 11
holy crap they cry alot lol
| paolini riordan grant 4/14/13 . chapter 51
As good as cp cud have dun
| Erico 3/20/13 . chapter 52
Dude, great story, you write really well. And dam'n, the ending was a lot better than paolini's, as this time AxE actually happended
Keep writing, best regards
| stapet 2/16/13 . chapter 52
amazing story truly magnificent
paolini should have given over his writing rights to you in order to give the public something like that
don't give up on writing stories you absolutely rock
| Darth Sadist 2/14/13 . chapter 35
Pretty fucking weird that neither Eragon nor anyone else spares even a single thought to His dead son..(?)
| Anonymous 2/5/13 . chapter 33
It's really great, only a few minor problems I just wanted to point out - when you kill a shade, (not through heart) doesn't it disappear and reappear somewhere else? Like when Murtagh killed Durza with his bow and arrow in Eragon. Another is why didn't Eragon use the name of all names to free everyone from their bonds...
| Dracones 2/4/13 . chapter 52
Long time no see indeed! I'll see if I can find it, mate, so good luck! Can't believe it's actually half a year... Given up on IF now. I've actually written one more thing for IF, a farewell note of sorts, which has been ready to wave goodbye to the land of Algaesia almost since the website crashed. Just for something to do with it, I might send it to you, just to see what you think. Would you be alright with that?
Happy new year!
| My Generation 2/3/13 . chapter 52
And boom goes the dynamite!
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 2/3/13 . chapter 52
I was wondering if you had left FF et co. for good. Glad you haven't. I will make sure I check out and review your work on fiction press (as soon as I finish the ridiculous amount of homework my school keeps laying on me -_-). But seriously, I will do for sure. :D
| creeperbrine 1/30/13 . chapter 10
you are the first person to make me show my emotional side and im only read 20% of the story