|Reviews for Chaos|
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 4/17/12 . chapter 35
ah, poor eragon, he's in a right mess :( good for murtagh and nasuada though :D nice chapter again
| VoXR 4/17/12 . chapter 35
First off, i was kicking my self because i completely missed a chapter. Like what the fudge me? Now back to something more relevant. I cant believe these two chapters. My mind is blown. The second half of Firnen's story was so sad and answered a lot of question and then the recovery section was an interesting mixture of sorrow and hope. I expected this story to end soonish after the big battle but now its like no here's an extra pack of epicness. Absolutely cant wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
| Ocadioan 4/17/12 . chapter 35
Well that was not a long mourning period for Nasuada hehe, but I have wondered about something. When Murtagh knows the Word why does he not just remove the shades' wards and make a spell to crush their hearts and then bye bye shade?
| ExA-mazing 4/12/12 . chapter 34
Oh. O you are crazy. I hate you now. Well, mmm. Fírnen has this. And some ( need more) answers. But this oooo I don't know.
| ExA-mazing 4/12/12 . chapter 33
Oh my. Well that was deep. It is interesting the way thus story has a lot of depth, going back to the play and such. This tho, err mmm aaa
| Restrained.Freedom 4/12/12 . chapter 34
Wow... that scene was quite disturbing.
For my own comfort, I will probably just imagine that there was one child, and keep reading.
| Dragonlord supreme 4/12/12 . chapter 14
Great grammar and storyline
| CaptainBeer 4/11/12 . chapter 34
Yay you finally updated lol
| My Generation 4/11/12 . chapter 34
Wow, truly amazing. I have said this so often but I write like your weaving a spell and you have me. I don't really know what to say because I only want to read your next chapter, I desperately want to see how you choose to finish this amazingly well written story. Bravo.
| Joda-Eragonsson 4/11/12 . chapter 34
Boy, I was in tears from the death of there third child, Arya really is lost. If she somehow gets changed back however, unlikely she would never forgive herself. Good to see the three children before, the 1st child was murdered lived up to there parents names as Shadeslayer. As I expect a happy ending the 2 surviving children are going to be special. Can't wait for chapter 35
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 4/11/12 . chapter 34
interesting, so we know now how Firnen escaped with the kids... now to see how eragon defeats Kaxon and turns Arya back to normal..? great chapter again though :D
| OnceAlways 4/11/12 . chapter 34
Oh dear, what a grim scene! ):
But it was very well-written, as is the rest of this story.
Uncharacteristically, I'm actually hoping that they don't manage to restore Arya- After this scene she would never recover from what Ashuna did, in my opinion.
| Ocadioan 4/11/12 . chapter 34
great chapter, nice going babes, becoming shadeslayers from birth.
It seems I was right in my suspicions on how Firnen escaped.
| Restrained.Freedom 4/11/12 . chapter 33
| Vaedhiv 4/11/12 . chapter 34
I don't know what to say
But I feel I should, but my mind can't comprehend.