ah, poor eragon, he's in a right mess :( good for murtagh and nasuada though :D nice chapter again

First off, i was kicking my self because i completely missed a chapter. Like what the fudge me? Now back to something more relevant. I cant believe these two chapters. My mind is blown. The second half of Firnen's story was so sad and answered a lot of question and then the recovery section was an interesting mixture of sorrow and hope. I expected this story to end soonish after the big battle but now its like no here's an extra pack of epicness. Absolutely cant wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

Well that was not a long mourning period for Nasuada hehe, but I have wondered about something. When Murtagh knows the Word why does he not just remove the shades' wards and make a spell to crush their hearts and then bye bye shade?

Oh. O you are crazy. I hate you now. Well, mmm. Fírnen has this. And some ( need more) answers. But this oooo I don't know.

Oh my. Well that was deep. It is interesting the way thus story has a lot of depth, going back to the play and such. This tho, err mmm aaa

Wow... that scene was quite disturbing.

For my own comfort, I will probably just imagine that there was one child, and keep reading.

awesome!

Great grammar and storyline

PLEASE UPDATE

Yay you finally updated lol

Wow, truly amazing. I have said this so often but I write like your weaving a spell and you have me. I don't really know what to say because I only want to read your next chapter, I desperately want to see how you choose to finish this amazingly well written story. Bravo.

Boy, I was in tears from the death of there third child, Arya really is lost. If she somehow gets changed back however, unlikely she would never forgive herself. Good to see the three children before, the 1st child was murdered lived up to there parents names as Shadeslayer. As I expect a happy ending the 2 surviving children are going to be special. Can't wait for chapter 35

interesting, so we know now how Firnen escaped with the kids... now to see how eragon defeats Kaxon and turns Arya back to normal..? great chapter again though :D

Oh dear, what a grim scene! ):

But it was very well-written, as is the rest of this story.

Uncharacteristically, I'm actually hoping that they don't manage to restore Arya- After this scene she would never recover from what Ashuna did, in my opinion.

great chapter, nice going babes, becoming shadeslayers from birth.

It seems I was right in my suspicions on how Firnen escaped.

Stunning...

O.O

I don't know what to say

But I feel I should, but my mind can't comprehend.