I love it so far! I would love what happens plus I think it would be cool if she had a relationship with a guy on the team like Allen Sanders, Laurence , Dusty, Joey, or Rabbit. Also u made a small error in the people that's Sanders who folded the maps no Lauence he had the camera and rode with Joey. But anyway I love Brandi so far she seems really cool please update soon.

Hey this is pretty good so far :) I love Twister it's one of my fave movies, and I love reading fanfics on it Keep up the great work :)

I like the story so far :) Angry sister-in-law, that he was probably close to, I image Brandi also feels a little angry because he was like a big brother and he abandoned her too!

I own two copies of Twister, I watch it whenever it comes on the TV and I love fanfiction lol. I look forward to more.

love seeing a new Twister story up! totally a Jo/Bill shipper. More please soon.

I love seeing a Twister fic! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I loved it!