How short is Abel now? (finding it hard to think of Abel as short...)

Love Leon's reaction at the end of this chapter, it made me laugh "this shrimp" lol.

an interesting start. I like how you are making Abel a cross between a goof and someone serious.

nice idea!

I could have reviewed last chapter because I was still up when you put it up but I wanted to think on what you said in the AN. _

Anyway I love where this story is going, poor Abel, he's gonna have hell when he recovers now that they know he's been holding back all this time. XD

I swear I'm cracking up while reading this, and don't worry about the chapters being to short. They're good and that's the most important thing. Don't push yourself!

Chaos

Ha ha. So far all the tests just reinforces Leon's belief that he isn't Abel. I'm just starting to wonder if the incomplete activation of Abel's Crusnik form is the cause of his amnesia.

nice...!

so far this seem to be really great story

I will admit I was cracking up during this. LOL Abel kicked ass. XD

I really like this, it actually seems realistic unlike some other Kid-Abel in present time stories. But I will not deny those were kinda funny...

Anyway I'd love to see more, and I felt real pity for Abel with the Terran blood. Sorry our blood makes you sick Abel! D:

DemonHeart: I highly doubt you can be classified as a human being.

... Shut up.

Chaos

I really love this story so far.

interesting...update soon

Lol! Abel a kid but why was Leon that hard on Abel?

Hmm. Abel must be really pissed. I wonder if he still's a pacifist. This is a really good story please continue with it.

Ooh... I'm REALLY liking this. I think kid-Abel is so nice, in the sad way. Because he's so angry yet he's so young. It makes me like him because he goes through so much yet stays mostly strong.

I really want to see more! But I can wait as long as you want me to. _

Chaos

Interesting start so far. Hope to read more