This is absolutely amazing. Amazing, purely amazing.

Very well paced and great characterization! Can't believe I haven't read this earlier..

This was amazing. I really really enjoyed it and I think you did a great job with it.

i love that Danny felt the need to save Vlad from space. hell, i love that you brought Vlad back! the way their relationship picked up right where it left off, even with the whole world knowing and their acknowledgement of the reasons why is amazing and makes so much da*n sense.

Jack's reaction to it all feels alittle off even though it is in chara.

Hay I'm sorry but you know that your not supposed to write 2nd point of view story's it's in the rules. I'm sorry to sound mean but it's true I read them recently. I hope I don't sound impolite.

Interesting. Very well written.

AWESOME STORY!

Wow...drastic going on here, but I definitely love the emotions you threw in here! Is there a series for this or no?

Other than that, fantastic job!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading what else you've written.

I'm glad I finally got around to reading this in earnest. "Yet he could see his breath." Entropy of an elemental revenant core, perhaps? I'm definitely starting to see how this story drives in sequel in more than just the story line.

this story is creepy. It's excellently written. the concept is wonderful. It is also creepy as fuck. The erotic undertones are less under tones and more just, i don't even know what they are. It's hideously creepy. But I couldn't stop reading for long. I had a mental BSOD at least once during the reading of this. Like I said super creepy, but excellent. Today deserves my favorite.

Beautifully written :)

very good

I like how you portrayed both vlad an dhis relashinship with danny espesially when danny joined him at the spa!

heheheh

keep on writing

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How I love this story. The space blow out, and the detail to dealing with the hazards. I especially loved the details going into voiding the contract and contemplating bringing Jack up on charges. I never thought about that at the time, but it's actually way harsher than the show makes it out to be.

I especially loved how Vlad and Danny were fighting one minute then commiserating over food the next.

I also found it amusing that there was a song like that from a musical called "Chess". I may have to look into it. The synopsis sounds interesting.

wow. Like Wow.

It is rare to see a story that merges into canon as seamlessly as this. More than anything what sets this story apart from the countless others that I have read is the way that you touch upon the emotion and sensation of the characters and render it beleivable and real.