more please

Go go go

You should totally continue this story. I've been waiting for an update for months. Please update!

True love conkers all!

This is has the potential to be really good! I like the plot and the background stories, but the thing that's kinda buggin' me is that u don't stop narrating. The characters barely "speak" and when they do, they do it at the most random times as if u're just putting it in there. Then, so far as I have seen, u don't do any flash back of anything, and then u got the ages so badly messed up that it's confusing. Harry, or Rose in this case, is supposed to get her Hogwarts letter after/during the time she is turning 11. I understand if u have Ichigo and Rose go to school like normal kids, if they are passing off as twins, but then the real twins of thee story should be babies/toddlers! They shouldnt be able to properly talk yet, let alone pick out clothes and cook breakfast! Also, u havent even described Rose's looks, making the readers asume what she looks like, which isn't good for any writer to do. I hope these help u in ur writing so this story can be so much better.

Lulu out

loooooooooooooooooooove it. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work. update soon.

Dumble-dweeb should know better then to against the Goddess. I bet Fudge was in on it too. For a leader, the guy is so spineless. -_- Dumbledork escaped? (still having fun with names) Seriously, does no one think of sealing someone's magic when they're going to prison? (that goes for canon too) Snape and Szayel getting along would be so canon.

At least she can see in Las Noches...

I like it! **

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

Getting used to seeing and then going blind again has got to suck...

I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

plz write more

Yay Kaiya-chan can see, at least while she's in the afterlife. Brings a whole new meaning to 'I see dead people' *is shot* XD Aw, dreams can come true X3 So that explains the protectors. I wonder what the inheritance will be? Finally a kiss and a declaration of love. I wonder how Voldemort would react to knowing that he was manipulated into attacking an innocent baby girl?

interesting. i do hope that Kaiya will gain back her sight soon. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work. update soon.

It's always amusing to see to people flit around when you know they love each other. X3 And Yama-teme just had to ruin a good day. At least he got what he deserved. Sweet, Ichi's a stallion. Kaiya can get her sight back? Yay