Two thums up!

LOVE. IT.

One word: HOT! I love a submissive Itachi to, but having a dominant uke Itachi is always nice. Sorry Itachi-chan but you'll never top Kisame-sama. NEVER!

I love it too

Submissive Itachi was kinda cute, great story! Keep up the good work! :)

Wow. I loved it. (x

&I totally agree with you. A completely submissive Itachi is just omgsquee. Like, I don't even know, it's just hot as hell and you managed to capture that almost flawlessly.
I really enjoyed the dialogue that you created. It was fun to read, and very funny at times. As for Kisame's domineering personality..DROOL. Hot. Loved it. I don't think there was anything that I didn't really, really like in this chapter. xD Short and sweet. The whole story was.

As for the lemon, well, it was pretty legit. A tied-up Itachi is unbearably secksy. What can I say. You wrote the whole thing wonderfully.

It's just sad that you're ending it here.. ): I really do wish there were more to this. The world needs more WELL-WRITTEN KisaIta, and this one holds/held a lot of promise. Hopefully, out of something miraculous, you will change your mind and make it multi-chapter. :D

Really enjoyed it. Incredible flow and grammar. Keep it up.

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Damn, I love Kisame and submissive Uchihas. Fantastic job

Well this is a great beginning to something that has sparked my interest. Keep up the goo work I can't wait to read more :)

ADD MORE!

Hmm, pretty interesting. I would love to see more :)

You simply must continue this!

The summary caught my attention almost immediately, and I'm DYING to see how the whole story unfolds. (:

Please update soon! It seems very promising so far.

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this kisachi/itame story is great! hope that the rest of the story is just as awsome as the begining!

My interest is piqued! I will keep an eye out for your next update, hopefully you shall make it lengthier ;ruri.

Ugh! Needs 2nd chapter! xD